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The origins of Boyd Investment Group is begun in 'Quarter Ton' in the Group Sex category.

Holly Tannenbaum is a character introduced in 'Very Pretty Things' in the Lesbian Sex category. She is the oldest daughter of Valerie and Roger Tannenbaum.

Becky Trahan, formerly Becky Wright is a character briefly mentioned in 'Cast Adrift' in the Incest/Taboo category.

Irwin Trahan, Marc's older brother is a character introduced in the 'Knowing Your Strength' series in the Nonhuman category.

Samantha Luquette, the Casa Ole waitress is introduced in 'Twist to Remove' in the Loving Wives category.

Carrie Hebert, the artist's exhibition at the Lopez Center that Holly and Hank attend is briefly mentioned in the 'Edge of Breaking' series in Lesbian Sex category. Her art is described in 'Painting Pearls' in the Lesbian Sex category.

The Lopez Center, where the Carrie Hebert exhibit is being shown is located where the former Johnson Furniture & Appliances Rent-To-Own used to be located. Anita Lopez, entrepreneur bought the building, then renovated it into a three story building, with amphitheater on the ground floor, and open floorplan on second and third floors. She then turned around and donated the building to St. Elizabeth Parish. Both Johnson Furniture & Appliances and Anita Lopez are introduced in the 'Wealth' series.

The Lambert condominiums are introduced in the 'Explanation of Love' series in the Lesbian Sex category.

Matthew 'Mattie' Goldman, Rickey and Woody are all introduced in 'Playing Kissy Face' in the Loving Wives category.

Daisy Upchurch and Paula Boudreaux, the residents of the trailer park are characters introduced in 'Vodka: Cinnamon' in the Mature category.

Penny Jones, Holly's attorney is introduced in 'Righting a Wrong' in the Romance category.

Parker Johnson, Mattie's attorney is introduced in 'Admission of Guilt' in the Romance category. His temperament as an attorney is further developed in 'Johnson, Johnson & Lambert' in the Romance category.

Professional Dry Cleaners, Mattie's place of employment is introduced in 'Nothing to Offer' in the Loving Wives category.

Donna Watson, her brother Jordan and Jordan's flirtatious boyfriend Mitchell are all characters introduced in 'Vodka: Tropical Passion' in the Group Sex category.

Buddy Roberts, the manager/owner of the trailer park is first introduced in 'Kindling & Tears' in the Loving Wives category. His position as owner and manager of the trailer park is introduced in 'Vodka: Tropical Passion' in the Group Sex category.

Henrietta's schoolmates, Clay Kraggle, Kincaid 'Bridges' Roberts, and Ashley St. Martin are all characters introduced in the 'Quantity Vs Inequality' series.

Milt Duhon, the chef of 'The Cast Iron Stomach' and the reporter, Chelsea Duhon, formerly Chelsea Guidry are characters first introduced in 'On Channel 12' in the Loving Wives category.

Lou Ellen Stamey is briefly mentioned in 'A Sugar cube Melts' in the Group Sex category. At the conclusion of that tale, it is revealed that the forty three year old Louellen is pregnant with Amelia Frances Stamey.

The Elgee Culinary College that Mealy attends is introduced in 'Life Anew' in the Transgender & Crossdressers category.

Have a swell day. And some of you, have a swollen day.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Yeah, but the tagline for this story is “Being used don’t feel too good.” And since the story really isn’t about the ex-wife, but about Hank and Holly, I have difficulty reconciling that line with the ending of the story, where Marc seems to be going along with the women’s program.

Because he was being used. Hank and Holly lied by omission. Not a good way to start a relationship, no matter how many people are involved. In fact, in this culture, unusual relationships require more honesty and taking even better care of each other’s feelings, because they have to constantly handle additional stresses from a judgmental society.

Sure, they’re pleasant, affectionate women and the sex is great, but you don’t have a baby on purpose without telling the guy up front that’s what you want. 🤬

So I am very sad for Marc. 😩

Sorry, I usually love your stories. Not this time.

RuttweilerRuttweilerabout 1 month ago
Enjoyable fantasy

What man wouldn’t feel like he were living in a waking dream?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I feel a bit bad for Mark. Does he ever find his true love? Or is he doomed to be just a tool--an approved male role model for two children--for two women who are each other's true love? Polyamory isn't really a tenable relationship.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

What a fun story. Loved it. Felt I was right there with them living sweet times in LA. Pass them redbeans and rice and buttermilk pie.

Ridiculous69Ridiculous693 months ago

Just not up to your usual standards. No character to like or root for. MC is way to weak and meek. The ending fell flat and made MC just a sad and spineless pushover.

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