All Comments on 'Unacceptable'

Fantastic! Five stars as usual! Loved the characters. Thanks for the contribution.

Mama's boy!

5

That took an unexpected left turn! Honestly, I suppose that I should've see it coming, but I was so focused on Anja that I expected it to be her story. You got me good, and I had to laugh at my gullibility. Well written & well told!

That was unexpected. Well written, thanks

So the most work you're actually willing to do is use a pre-installed software? You actually expect that to catch anything but spelling errors? That's just lazy and childish.

You should have stopped after your explanation that you lost her for your own enjoyment, and that of equally moronic, boarderline illiterates. Those are the only people who get enjoyment out of mangled words thrown together with no thought to the language.

That was great and I would love to hear more about this mother and son.

This story is very average at best. Our hero is out trying to date an exotic dancer when he has a beautiful woman (lover) at home. Really doesn't make sense.

***That was different almost like one half of two stories. Thanks for the read.

I did NOT see that coming. I kept trying to figure out how Anja was going to bed her son, not Jesse and his mother. Great twist.

Good story. Too bad he didn't get her pregnant.

What a terrible boring awful story

If they drove to Houston for the opera and returned to a state that requires pasties on its ecdysiasts, that was a loooooong drive! Fun read, though.

Didn't see that coming at all! Just sneaky JimBob! Thanks for posting it!

Different but well-done...