All Comments on 'The Garbage Queens Pt. 02'

And a swell day to you also!

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Thank you for this wonderful series, it does get quite confusing with all the character but I enjoyed it.

Another great story by your. Lol forward to the next but not too you going quiet for awhile. Hope you come back sooner rather than later but either way your going to be missed.

I like how at the end you put who all are and what story they were in but who was Emily Lopez? The name sounds familiar.

I want to thank you for yet another good read with this series. I have greatly enjoyed your stories, and not for the sex, really, but for the plots. I enjoy your realistic use of dialogue, and the personalities you develop. I don't know that I would want to live in that area of Louisiana. A whole lot of folks seem to die violently! But you do make a place and a culture come alive. I understand that something we love today, may be something we enjoy next year, and something we're burned out on in a decade, but I am sorry you're not getting the joy you used to get out of writing. Sorry mostly for me, because I won't be seeing new stories by you. Thank you again for hours and hours of great entertainment.

You are an excellent storyteller. While I enjoy the sex, I read everyone of your tales because of the writing. I will be sad after yout next and as you hint pergaps final stort. Thank you. My day swells.

I love your stores please don;t stop, I have followed you since the Broussard Sisters. God Bless

I'm sorry to hear that you're no longer enjoying writing these. I feel like I've gotten to know the folks in Elgee, DeGarde, Baylor Lake and the Atchafalaya Basin, and I'll certainly miss the sprinklings of with & mirth that you drop in. More than most that I've read, your stories are about people and life. Thank you for sharing that with us, and I hope someday that you publish - or epublish - these as a series of books - I'd cheerfully pay for them!

Love your stories. I will miss your talented creations. They were always entertaining and very creative. I loved how you incorporated characters from earlier stories into the new ones. It make a real community for us (your readers) to enjoy.

Looking forward to your next story before you take a well deserved break. I do understand that writing has to take a lot of your free time.

I’ve always enjoyed your world and your storytelling even when some of the stories went in directions that didn’t appeal to me. You are a master at creating real characters. Thank you again for everything you have written and while I would love more stories I don’t think I would want to read them if they became a chore.

God luck with whatever you do next.

With the number of stories you have written I can believe you need a break. Thank you for sharing them here with us. And if you ever feel like writing again you have an audience waiting. Stay safe and thanks.

Welp...

As with all things in life, if you don't enjoy doing something, then its time to stop. Take a break, a breather, some time for other pursuits. We'll still love you when you're ready to come back. Who knows? You may want a break, but your creative side may say, "Break, schmake! Let's keep on keepin' on!!" and the next thing you know, you have a 20-part story.

But until then, take care of yourself. Thank you. ;)

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I will miss your stories mainly because of all the wonderful characters. Good luck in all future endeavors

JimBob 44 - my favourite Literotica author,

Great stories, disregard any nay-sayers!

Good luck with whatever you and thanks!!!!

the first part of the story was fine, then as it went along it got really crappy. Cant do much with the whole focus on ghetto speak.

at least its done. the funniest part is, with garbage queens there was no idea who was who

at least there wont be any more of this crap

Enjoyed the series. I’ll miss your talented writing, the stories are always fun reading, and the characters seem to “come to life” much more than most other writers are able to present. Be well and enjoy life.

Fantastic as always! 5 stars! I really enjoy reading your stories. I did discovered your stories a couple of years ago and quickly read all that you had posted. Every morning since, I have looked for your next submission. I am sorry to hear that you will not be posting any more stories. Best of luck!

Only one question: is that guy Bear the one who appears in your story "John's lament"?

Boy I love that story also!

I hope you enjoy your new pursuits as much as I enjoyed reading your wonderful creations. Keep Swelling!

@Omniferis

"Emily Lopez" is the shank that got Kerry in trouble in the start of Garbage King by dumping her stash in Kerry's purse and then shoplifting an iPhone on Kerry.

I suppose finding her body is just a nice way to say karma eventually paid her debt.

@georgelittle2000

"Bear" shows up in many stories, often involved as with a 12 step program.

Thank you for both this and all your other stories. Your realistic characters and the way new stories reference characters and events described in earlier stories has created a wonderful tapestry that has brought me much reading pleasure. I am saddened to hear that you no longer enjoy writing them and that this is the end.

I wish you well in whatever you move on to.

Paul.

Sir: I enjoy your stories. I worked deep water offshore oil for many years, flying out of Venice and Bootheville. I'm retired to the Black Hills, but have fond memories of Louisiana and the Cajun culture. You do a good job with the Cajun dialect, it sounds right to me. Thank you for the many hours of pleasure you have given.

Ok, I needed a program to keep up with this all-star cast! I love your catholic human characters, especially the vernacular.

I will miss you while you take a break, and I hope it’s a short one. But I hope even more you find personal fulfillment and enjoyment!

God bless!

kept me entertained but the best thing of all is, i can't believe i don't have to pay for this level of quality story writing, send me a bill jimbob44 i'l pay it.

please don't stop writing.

Can anyone explain to me what the connection is between the Fontenot case mentioned on page 5 and the Chad Fontenot story?

The story was all over the place. Very convoluted and without structure and proper continuation in areas. Yeah there’s some explanations later on, but they seem contrived. I do generally enjoy your stories, but this one was too messy in the end.

Loved loved loved it!!!!!

IT WAS REALLY GARBAGE. YOU SHOULD HAVE FOCUSED ON TODD AND KERRY, NOT TODD AND HIS HAREM. THE MAGICIAN PARTS WERE UNNECESSARY!! TRYING TO KIDNAP MIA WAS UNNECESSARY!! JUST REALLY LONG GARBAGE WRITING WRITING

Unfortunately, the a promising series ended on a letdown. Raul and Derek's stories feel pointless, but the worst is the story feels like you got bored of it and abruptly transitioned into an epilogue. Probably the worst part is we are denied a Todd and Kerry romance, we just got a done deal "seven years later". What was the point of all that buildup across three series just to deliver it like that?

With the exception of the Gordon and Kelly characters, no one in this tale makes a goddamn bit of sense. Oh, wait, the 4 year old made sense behaving like a 4 year old. But other than those three…just white trash nonsense.

Great stories. when they are good of course there are always characters you wish you knew more about.