by JimBob44
When are you going to rescue Princess Mia........... you've never left a child behind
Good story so far, I feel sorry for the child. I know you don't take ideas from people, but I really do hope she meets her grandad and gets a better life
Another slice of life from a culture and part of the country that becomes vivid through your storytelling. Thanks, JimBob.
Fantastic!! Five stars. I really like your stories. Thanks for sharing your stories with us. Look forward to your next submission.
i don't know what JB plans, but hopefully, she gets rescued; but--maybe the two dirtbags she's stuck with take her down to the bayou, get so screwed up on booze or drugs, and just lose her...
i like her being rescued, but JB does throw some uglies into the game.
either way, it'll be five stars.
Have been a fan of yours for years. And a agree with you you don’t need any one to check your work. It would take away your touch and the feel you give to your caracteres and story line. Sadly I have become a troll i search your page daily for new stories. Thank you for sharing your work and no they are never to log to short but never to long 👍👍👍👍👍
How else do you describe it? Clearly a five. I too, would like Mia to be rescued, though at 3, it would be many years before she participates sexually. This is why I love JB so much. Real stories about what could be real life people, who have ups and downs just like us all, with a little wicked hot monkey sex thrown in. Absolutely loved the 4 girl 1 guy mini orgy. I noticed Kerry had her pussy eaten several times, but she never ate any. Hopefully that will change, maybe even with Kelly. But JB still rates 5 no matter what.
Jedd
I've been reading your stories before I actually created an account on here and still come back to read them frequently, as there usually fun to read. This is just another instance of a brilliant story and look forward to the next installments, hopefully there will be a few for the Garbage Prince and maybe one more for the Garbage King.
The interlude with the ex-wife holds zero interest to me.
I am sure JB has a plan for that part of the story, but I don't see it. When those parts come up, it just is a major distraction to all the rest.
This was unexpected with the Truth or Dare portion, it kicked up the eroticism quite a bit than what I was expecting. So many of the ladies like Todd. He almost would be beneficial to have a house on his own and the ladies. Perhaps for another time...college?
Very enjoyable, like most of your work. Thank you.
I come to JB44 to get schooled in dialogue. No one on Lit does it better. Thanks, JB.
Wow, you have a lot of loose ends to wrap up! i'm looking forward to see how you tie them all together, and conclude the story. And then i'm hoping for a story with some real Cajun dialogue like you do every so often. Many Thanks Jimbob44!
It's been almost three weeks. Is everything okay, you're usually so prolific.
The two proceeding parts of the "Garbage" series were
easily 5 stars.
This one, however, had the blotch of the spankings, which I just do not get how it's erotic or enjoyable
-- whether giving or receiving.
But it's IS an intriguing JimBob story.
Looking forward with anticipation as to how some of these story threads work themselves out.
🌟🌟🌟🌟
Paul in Oklahoma
I'm really enjoying this series, but the parts with Mia are heartbreaking. I hope things turn around for her.
KERRY AND KELLY CLASSIC TRAILER TPARK SLUTS....STREET WHORES WOULD BE BEST FOR THEM