All Comments on 'Olivia's Nanny Ch. 01'

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pip46pip46about 7 years ago
WOW

Can't wait for the next chapter

Ellienora35Ellienora35almost 7 years ago
Olivia is an adult

So Olivia should not habe driven drunk, but she is an adult. She should tell her parents she really wanted to study for her GRR and lI've at home, but she won't do that again. Go get a job and do it right.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

I'm confused who is Rachel?!

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years ago
Rachel???

OK details are important in a story. Why did the Nanny's name change to Rachel, back to Stephanie, back to Rachel and back to Stephanie again? There are also a lot of typos or just plain bad grammar in this story too. And WHO spanks a 22 year old? And by a nanny who is only 6 yrs older than her?? Not a very believable story.

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