All Comments on 'Oblivious'

I am having a swell day/. Thank you very much!

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Another great one from you wonderful collection of characters, Thank you!

Sorry, but your story jumps around so much that it’s like a bunch of random lines just pasted one after another. The lack of continuity and character/story development makes it hard to read. I’m sure these snippets make sense in your head as you write, but on paper they are just disjointed .

If the story is character driven, flowing dialogue I am down to read and enjoy JimBob44 latest addition to his Cajun multi-level universe. Five stars*****

There was no plot. Just day to day, no central story. Not good.

Another great story, Bentley is the man and we get to see other characters we've seen before from a different perspective.

Fun read, I enjoyed it immensely. Thank You for all your effort. Keep up the great work. Buster2U

Hot sex with a great story. Five stars. Thanks Jimbob!

A rollicking yarn!!

Another good one. Keep writing. More frequently.

Jimbob, you must be a good cook! You always have great food in your stories.

Your characters have some AWFUL home lives unfortunately, to the point when bad stuff happens, they seem numb to it (Bentley not getting at all emotional that Aurum was cheating on him. )