by zaxxon
Great story, I loved it! Hopefully you can take that question mark off of "To be continued." :)
Definitely needs to be continued. Both of them removing their swimsuits and...
Love it! The story starts and ends a little abruptly and cheesy terms like "fuck-melons" and "fuckrod" are a major peeve of mine, but this is otherwise very well-written and DEFINITELY needs more chapters!!!!
Hooters? Really??? Grow up! Stopped reading then and there. I’m a woman and this just turned me so off. Almost quit with the obvious “squirting” references about the lotion but gave you the benefit of the doubt there.