All Comments on 'Beach Vixen'

Great story, I loved it! Hopefully you can take that question mark off of "To be continued." :)

it seems like it needs a part II

Definitely needs to be continued!

Definitely needs to be continued. Both of them removing their swimsuits and...

Make a chapter 2, this is such a great great story

YES it should be continued!

One of my favorite stories on Literotica. I'd love to see a followup.

Love it! The story starts and ends a little abruptly and cheesy terms like "fuck-melons" and "fuckrod" are a major peeve of mine, but this is otherwise very well-written and DEFINITELY needs more chapters!!!!

Hooters? Really??? Grow up! Stopped reading then and there. I’m a woman and this just turned me so off. Almost quit with the obvious “squirting” references about the lotion but gave you the benefit of the doubt there.