All Comments on 'Yule Snow & Trade In'

Both were HAWT!

I could use more just like those, or even sequels!

Yummy!

Thank you!

Be well,

FDD

I've actually really enjoyed all the short tales you've posted recently but they're more just erotic scenarios/situations to me rather than 'stories'. Personally I'd prefer them worked into something as part of a larger story but that's because I like to be pulled into the fantasy. You write well and the stories are hot but, for me personally, it's not long enough to get me involved.

.... for a slightly different reason. These two were a little too close to the "incest" line for my tastes. Please choose your category with care. Otherwise, keep writing!

Your young girl/Older man stories are my favs!

Always filled with lust and funny dialogs and steamy awesomely written sex

Hope you have more cuming

I bet they will be perfect as always!

I enjoyed both stories, short but to the point. You always give us good stuff.

The stories were great as always. I think you could have made them separate, and get more votes, but that's just the lust talking.

Both the stories are wonderful. Quick and effective. The descriptions are hot and the situations quite believable. Keep writing!

- Mandy from India

Short & quick but somehow lacks in getting the reader involved.

Just seems superficial.

Bill S.

Sexy, erotic and perfect! Thanks for sharing!!

I don't know what you do for a living, but you pack more energy in 1200 words or less than anybody on this site.

I'm shortchanging you again.

This offering deserves at least 14 stars (7 each)

They're only gonna give you 5

*****Two Hot reads. Thanks for sharing.

That second story is one of the hottest I've read on here.