All Comments on 'You Can't Fight Nature'

I'll be sad when you turn in your amatuer card and decide to go pro....Keep the hits coming!

Fairly easy to figure out the whole story ahead of time, but then the possibility of a twist always threatened around the next corner... SS06, I wish you would not give so much away in the title and sub-title. TU for the entertainment!

I really enjoyed it as I have most of your previous works. I do have two nits to pick. Can't help myself, it's in my nature as a gun guy which you apparently aren't. You happened to hit on two of my pet peeves.

1. It's called a magazine not a clip. No semi-auto handgun holds the bullets in a clip, though a very few can be loaded using a stripper clip.

2. Recoil has absolutely no affect on where the bullet goes. The bullet is tavelling so fast it is out of the gun before recoil moves the barrel (can't fight physics). What affects bullet placement is flinching by the shooter in anticipation of the recoil.

Keep up the good work.

This story stayed on my mind long after I read it. That is always a sign of a very good story. 5 stars

Except for poor Tanya, who had to suffer because of the bitch.

A very good read, thanks

You best in a while. Loved it! Great message as well.

This story was AWESOME 😍 ! I couldn't put my iPhone down. When penny was spouting the slut transcript regarding her fathers habitual cheating I instantly knew that she too was fucking around on Donnie because she spoke with so much passion, I think by penny's mother staying with Ed after catching him with his dick in the cookie jar multiple times--the mother was teaching/showing penny that this was acceptable behavior. No matter how old your kids are they still look up to their parents, so when the braindead mom kept taking Ed back she was teaching penny false love, because if you truly love someone you wouldn't constantly do things to rip their hearts out. I don't understand why penny fuck'd around, I also don't understand why she cheats with fat, balding guys? Did penny have daddy issues? The guys she threw her marriage away for fits the description of her father. I would've like to have known how long she's been fucking around? Penny was a fucking slut nothing could've been done to help her keep her legs close unless Donnie stapled her pussy & ass shut & even then I think she'd start taking the dicks up her nose & ears that's how big of a slut she was; shit she took a cruise in anticipation of getting her husband back but she turned around & fuck numerous guys on the ship! What if Donnie was on the same ship was she going to leave him in the room while she go dick sampling? I think the whole I can't help it ; I was born this way is horse shit, she wasn't born to cheat, just like her father wasn't born to cheat, she kept cheating because she assumed there wouldn't be any consequences, as well as she's been doing it for so long that she no longer felt guilt, remorse or shame; she got away with it for so long that she assumed like her moronic mother Donnie would forgive her because he loves her & she loves him--that isn't my idea of love. She didn't know her husband if she actually thought he was like her mother. I thought it was hilarious when she caught her mom & Donnie fucking... Ha! I'm a very vegenful type chic & that really sounds like something I'd do if I was Donnie. I think what pisses of the hurt party when a spouse cheats is the years you spent wasted with someone that's so unworthy of you. All that time spent turning into inspector gadget could've been spent dumping the cheater & replacing them with a better model. I've been cheated on before & I forgave the dick face I forgave him so much where he no longer his them from me he'd bring them to our apartment & lie to my face about what they're doing there. This is what happens, the cheater stops respecting you, the apologies when caught becomes a broken record or a script because you've heard it all before. Sure they can swear that it'll never happen again but what they really mean is that they swear you won't ever catch them again. I loved this story..you did an excellent job at portraying regardless of how much you love & care for someone they'll still shit on that love.... I don't like to see the brain dead slut wives die in stories because I think death is letting them off the hook way too easy, I would of loved for the gutter slut to live & see her ex-husband happy with her mother. That would've been soul crushing .. Perfect punishment for a soulless cum slut

This story works as opposed to the last one by this author which was a pile of shit. For the stupid people out there let me briefly explain what the issue is.

The issue is NOT whether or not the reader agrees with the plot or ending of a particular story. The issue is whether not it makes sense given the extraordinary circumstances within the story and whether or not the characters reactions are supported by the foundational character development by the author.

For example... in this author Last story ...GUESS WHO ? ... we have a guy named JIMMY who for some reason is deeply in love with a horrible deceptive lying cheating repulsive human being that happens to have a Pussy and goes by the name of Heidi. Even after her scheme to pin her false pregnancy on Jimmy is exposed.... (Jimmy see this scheme blow up right in front of him)... he still wants to marry her and he still expect the marriage to work. To most readers that sort of bizarre attitude requires a lot of foundational explanation and character development in order to make the story work. SS06 never does this so the story fails and Jimmy looks like a turd and nobody has any sympathy for somebody this perpetually fucking stupid.

In then THIS story we see the exact opposite. Here early in the story we see the husband's true feelings and reactions about the cheating and especially serial cheating. Don is smart and savvy and is easily able to cut through all the rationalizations and bullshit tat ED is using.

And as a result when PENNY is caught and promises to change Don does not for second believe it because she is using the excuse that it's part of her nature... which is the same excuse that her father used.

Moreover -- this is the KEY point -- her reaction to Don's strong stand perplexes Penny because she doesn't understand WHY anybody would have a reaction except what she ...PENNY.. thinks SHOULD be happening. In other words Penny seems to have this certain reaction or scenario that is going to occur once her cheating is exposed and it seems to involve Donnie rolling over in accepting it.

Yet this reaction by Penny tell Don more about her than anything else by showing a much deeper character flaw and self centeredness than Penny's rationalizations could ever show. The more penny screams and reacts and pleads because this is not going according to her plan of how she thinks Don SHOULD be reacting ... and more it kills the marriage.

Good story

Another great story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Thank you.

love cheaters getting treated like shit cause that is all they ever deserve.

I agree with harryinva that the characters were established but I find it difficult to buy the marrying (this particular) mother in law angle.

She was a one man woman (whether by nature or force of society) and loved her husband and daughter.

Her moving in with her daughter's husband seems a bit contrived and doesn't gel with the rest of her character. I can't come up with a logical reason and say that this is why but at the same time it seems a bit off.

I would expect her to support him in the future but not have an affair or even worse, flaunt it in her daughter's face,

But ehh it was a fucked up family so who can predict how they think or behave.

Thanks for sharing a good read.

even if the ending was, to some extent, telegraphed on the opening page.(the guy and his mother-in-law getting together really became a matter of when, not if), and it makes a nice change to see a story about people sticking to their principles.

The only thing that didn't appeal to me was an honest woman likeTanya taking the hit (and I have to say that sitting there and waiting for her victim seems to have been more 'premeditated' than passion), but, hey, life isn't always fair.

though that's not necessarily a bad thing.

decent story, decent writing . . . you know what you are going to get: a well thought out interesting read.

My nit to pick -- one line: "She looked at me strangely and just sighed as I hung up". oops.

she cant look at you and hang up the phone unless you are in the same room with her as you make the call. ok maybe it was facetime or skype. donnie osmond LOL. not as good as dick Ins but still good. 5

Nothing at all! Great story with a fitting ending.

You crack me up! Another great story, please keep them coming! 5 stars

Don Osmond. Willis Drummond. "What are you talking about, Willis?" lol I love when you manage to work things like that. I always get a good laugh. I try to catch your stories every week.

You did make a couple of mistakes though that you and your editor both should be more vigilant at catching. First, you made a mistake in a telephone conversation. Don can't actually see Penny looking at him strangely when they're having a telephone conversation. Second, in a number of your stories I often see you accidentally using quotation marks where there shouldn't be. In this story, it's at the point where Judy comes to see Don.

I enjoyed this decidedly more than last week. This weeks protagonist is a more likeable guy. I also enjoyed the irony of Penny's demise being the same as her father's.

Good read, thanks for sharing. Looking forward to the next.

At least he didn't know about her affairs this time until the end. Still he wasted a few years of his life. Or maybe not since he may not have met the mother otherwise... still though.

Keep the stories coming.

Basically, you're saying "It's fiction. It's not that big a deal." Therefore, negative response or positive response: it's all the same.

I read your stories for the Mustang information but you also have a vast insight to the thinking of men and women. You have now informed me as to what was going on in my exwifes head back in Fulda when she tryed to sleep with the entire base. Thank you, I am at peace now. Keep up the good work.

Were do you pull these stories from? F' outstanging!

Thanks for a another fine tale

I think the hints were more obvious this time but great story as always. Keep up the good work

Don't know how you come up with these tales, but I'm really glad you do. It had everything: humor, the Mustang, and a truly insane wife. Great story and very good editing (it could still use a proof reader).

your stories are what has kept me from going nuts as I recover from surgery,, ALWAYS look forward to seeing them posted cause I know I'll have a great time reading,,5*

Here's why: You tend to write in patterns that have been noted and commented by others. Mustang. Saint Husband. Cheating Wife. Second Chance Wife, Often WIfe's Sister. Saint Husband turns into Genius Criminal Mastermind. Wife Dissolves Into Screaming Fits, Weeping That She Never Meant to Hurt Him. Impassioned Speech By Husband About Evils of Cheating. Divorce. Husband Wins Everything or Wins "Lottery". Children Love Father, Hate Mother. Vignette of Destroyed Ex-Wife. Saint Husband Gets Saint Wife. Saint Children Are Conceived.

Very much a pattern. You changed it up some in your darker stories, throwing in things like "mistaken" incest and outright murder, and some of your earlier stories even had the novelty of a second chance wife who had once cheated. That kind of patterned behavior can be annoying in some authors, though you've kept your stories creatively inspired enough to be able to overlook the constantly recurring themes.

That's why this story is better, changing things up, breaking out of the old molds even if only a little. It's the mother (lol) instead of the sister, and holy shit! the husband turned out to be human, leaving another victim of cheating in the dark, until she found out and was so emotionally overwrought that she committed murder. When Penny was killed, he felt guilt for what happened to Penny, but no guilt for Tanya's imprisonment, despite the fact that he's really more responsible for what happened to Tanya than Penny. He could have supported her, helped her through the revelations. But he didn't, and instead acted like a normal and flawed human. I like the basic humanity of Tanya as well. The murder in this story means something, rather than being some cleverly orchestrated karmic or revenge device by a genius mastermind.

That's a missing ingredient to many of the characters you write, a basic element of humanity and normalcy. You can't look at the male protagonists in many of your stories and see a normal guy, until he overreacts to the cheating, because normal guys aren't so perfect, and most certainly not deserving of perfect second chance wives who are almost as realistic as the husband himself.

Five stars for making your characters human.

What a surprise. But, really, how much of a chance does a wife have of coming out of StSt land undamaged or even alive? Precious little. Such a predictable plot takes a whole lot of the zest out of the story. These Mustang owners have terrible taste in women.

good story but just for the record when a gun recoils the bullet has already left the barrell. if there is a mistake it is ususlly pulling instead of squezing the trigger and it pulls the gun low before firing

same damn fucking old plot. same hero, same evil person in different clothes. why the fuck do people read Sherlock Holmes? and that should take care of the naysayers here who complain about the same plot.

"Neither of us had anything to do with her death,"

Yeah, keep telling yourself that bucko. Good story overall but I couldn't buy that tripe at the end. If he'd had a heart and a brain he'd have told Tanya after he left and had screwed over his ex with the settlement and proof. He hates Rick but thinks they'll work it out? He'd won the battle, broke free of the assault charge potential yet he let Tanya be made a fool of like he had been. If she'd been a jerk to him or your typical american feminist I could see him not caring but Don makes excuses to not tell her, to spare her feelings. That leads to a death and a woman in jail that shouldn't be.

-Hex

Not bad at all. I enjoyed it and thought the ending worked out well......I mean how else could it have ended.......I sure don't buy in to "it just happened and I couldn't help it." Do the crime....do the time....Thanks

" He had a nine mill with one of those oversized clips. He shot your father eight times and saved the last round for himself."

Ummm, it is a MAGAZINE, not a clip and most "nine mill's" hold twelve to fourteen from the factory unless it is one of the small compact models. A so called "oversize clip" usually holds twenty or more and they frankly look stupid when you consider the idea of a pistol is to be able to carry it holstered. When I first read the sentence, I asked myself what happened to the rest of the bullets in the magazine and then noticed the last round bit. Some might say that clip and magazine are used interchangeably, but then again, I guess if I called your Mustang a Camero, it would be close enough?

Love the whole sorry. I noticed that some people pick you up on little details but even though i noticed them they did not effect the story at all. Please keep up the good work also could you please maybe write longer storys as i think it would work out great.

@ Harry a fable story need not be 100% real or need not show best behavioral for the main characters. A fable story wants to show idea(s) of the Author and sometime a fable story wants to use the brain of the readers.

A satyre wants same as a fable story, but the distance to the real life or real people behavior may be farer as in a fable story there is and the laughing is main weapon for guessing the meat of the satire.

A fantasy story may be much farer to the real life than a satire and a fable story are, but human feelings make the readers enjoy it. (for example Sci-Fi)

What a pity you like only real life stories alone, you lost much.

I liked it very much. More real than most stories here, even though fiction. One must be married to a cheating woman who gets unreasonable and or goes in to rages to understand. Fact is I left and got over a cheater that I loved too much, and who wanted her cake and eat it too. Now I am married to the kindest woman I ever met. Unfortunatly we have to wait until job contracts allow us to live together, but it's OK, we will endure.

Hey, do look at some of the critisism and learn. But dang good story and overall well written. Yeah I wish he had told Tanya but some folks think and act like he did, so OK.

...as usual. Stang and Mikothebaby, a great combination for producing great stories. Keep it up, Please!

Above 40 to be baby for women is not news in the media. It may be above 50 as with Claudia Cardinale's son. The Down syndrom can be tested by blood test and the miscarridge can be accomplished by medicin as well and the healthy baby porduction can be restarted.

There are ways you set up every story which work. There are the same elements in every story that are cute or quaint (like the protagonist's love of Stangs). Virtuous men, madly in love, overlooking their wife's flaws, while the wife cheats unrepentantedly but loves the ex-husband so much she can't move on and her life goes to hell (until she dies). He finds a new and much better love who even appreciates and is allowed to drive his car. These work over and over again.

The old sit-com names are another story (no pun intended). They drive me crazy. They detract from the story by taking an original story (even following a formulaic route) and making it seem contrived with unoriginal names. Others mention they find it cute. I Like your work, except forn that. For what it's worth.

Thanks for all your contributions!

A good story, but Tanya should have had a better ending. Donnie and Tanya together, Donnie's uncle and Judy together.

sorry, but while you have written many good stories this was your worst.

pssss also u stories are getting more cynical guess you too have.

Maybe a once upon story with a happy ever after could be nic for you too.

I'd like to see a story with a bit of tension.

Generally the tension in these stories is about how the man has to get over the cheating wife...which is made much easier by the second chace girl who is in all way shapes and forms sexier, better and more mature.

So here is my Christmas Wish List for a Stang Story

1) Children. Stang has a habit of lazily either making the couple young and childless or older so the kids are gone. In no case does 'Mr. Dedicated who Loves Totally' have to deal with the fact that HE would be leaving his kids behind or had to take them from their MOTHER. It was attempted a bit in 'Forever Gone, Forever You' but they weren't his kids! But even there it added something.

2) Work. I'd like to see a story where the husband works for the wife's father or SHE makes the most money. Or perhaps where both incomes were critical so 'driving off into the sunset' is a little less easy.

3) A story more like Cancer. What does Mr. Upright do if his wife is going to die...oops...sorry. Didn't think it through. He runs off and lets them die. But it's okay. He usually takes the kids.

4) I'd like to see one where the wife tries to get the most significant marital asset: the Mustang. Oops...is that heresy?

There is not much sense of loss except for a fuck buddy. It isn't helped by the fact that the guy is always established to be God's Gift to Women, which makes dumping her as significant to his social life as popping a pimple.

But your formula seems to work for most of your readers, so who am I to complain?

@ SS06 I think you should have used the ANR in the story. The elder second wife would have matched to the ANR well.

Your weakest story yet?

From the very beginning of this weak story we all knew Donnie boy was going to get some pussy from mum in law. What happened SS? Writers block AGAIN and you decide just to churn out your weekly submission? I'm guessing quantity rather than quality??? Weak weak weak: without substance.

You had a great concept and all the trappings of an excellent story but with you, mediocrity rules. I've wasted my precious time reading 6 pages of Nothing and now wasting more of my precious time writing a comment. Damn! Double punishment!

You are a great writer SS but you are getting sloppy. Stop being so commercial. Take pride in all your stories. And do the bloody best you can OR just don't bother posting Until you know you have done justice to a story. Now this is when you say, "yes mom".

Weak story with 4.51 vote??????!!!!!!!!!!!

I have seen a few comments regarding a repeating of themes. I'd like to add that: that's exactly what make SS06 a good read. If you don;t like his stories - go away. He has a knack of being able to give the story / topic new twists and I offer my thanks to him for that.

Always enjoy the storytelling; feels like an old friend relaying a distant memory. Keep it up!

excellent again thanks

Out of your stories. Yes, it's usually the same story with different plot twists, but you do surprise us once in awhile and come up with something that's completely off the wall for you. The biggest kick I get from your stories, though, is the names of your characters--Charlie Daniels, Donnie Osmond..... I've said it before & I'll say it again--SHEESH!!!

Tanya deserved better.

probably would have also been a winner, if donnie had told her that her worthless hubby was responsible for ruining his marriage.

You really screwed Tanya in this story :(

My problem with the idea that we are born to act a certain way is:

When you were an infant, how much reading did you do? Oh, you did not yet know how to read. You had to be taught how to read.

Your birth nature of ignorance was altered by your life experience of being taught to be knowledgeable. Yes, your "biological nature" is to be illiterate but it is your "social culture" that teaches you to be literate.

You are born hungry and you will stay hungry until you have been taught how to grow and harvest and cook edibles for food.

Whether it be theocracy or aristocracy or state-capitalism, the society you live in teaches you to act as demanded for your caste. People are collectively taught to be assholes, out of the individual fear of being rejected by the pack leaders.

The Stalinists had a saying, "When you run with wolves, you must learn to howl!"

- fanfare - {for the Common Man of decency}

Dance on the cunts grave and piss on it, and send tanya a box of smokes a week as a thank you from the world..she was never human anyway, a sad fact married cheating sluts are not humans they are..... just a wrong thing and all they breed are just unnatural thing, its in the blood.

Stang, How could you do Tanya like that? HAHA

And a coward, for not telling poor Tanya about her loser husband. He was also a hypocrite, because he lied to Judy, and got her to forgive Ed, just to get some pussy. If he was half a man, he would have told Tanya about the 2 pieces of cheating shit, but he was a coward because he wanted to avoid confrontation. He said he didnt want to hurt Tanya by telling her, but at least she would have had a friend to console her and to stop her from doing something stupid. Ed and Penny got off lightly with a quick death.

and he lives by it to the utmost, TK U MLJ LV NV

I couldn't disagree more.

His not telling Tanya had nothing to do with cowardice, you may disagree with him (as I do), but it was out of consideration for her, not cowardice.

So I didn't like how he ended up with his mother in law, and I didn't like how poor Tanya ended up in jail. That might be what happens in the real world, but it isn't why I read fiction.

1. The hook-up with Judy was unexpected until what, about page 6? I like unexpected twists.

2. Always happy when Stang (powder) burns the bitch

3. "I would love to have strings with you, Judy. I want ropes. I want fucking chains and cables." What a /great/ fucking line! If I ever start writing again, I may need to steal that one. ;-)

4. I gave it a five. The characters were consistent enough in their words & deeds, there was a happy ending, and there were some great lines and phrases.

5. Thanks!

VisualPerv

This is most unlike Stangstar, it was so predictable. The name gave the plot away and the ending was so predictable. I kept waiting for the Stangstar twist, but there wasn't any...

Disappointed

I agree with the previous person who commented on your story and I thought it would have been a classic if he married Tanya and Judy met someone else who loved her? Penny got shot by her lovers wife. ! Tanya gave birth to a boy and girl! They lived happy ever after! Pleeeeeeeeze rewrite the ending I know you can would ya? Apart from the ending the story is great! Love you all! Bye. Greg. Oh 8 stars= 80 %. Bye.

You wrote: ((( She looked at me strangely and just sighed as I hung up. )))

Can you give us an explanation as to how the fuck that is possible?? (Were they each using a Video phone??)

I loved this story, it was so much more than I was expecting when I started reading. I caught the "strange look as I hung up" mistake and while it needs to be corrected it did not detract from the story. Clearly the ending could have gone many different ways but I enjoyed the ending you wrote. The happily ever after was the perfect bookend to your opening line.

jeebus,, you gave the poor slob a whore for a whife and let him escape her .....for a senior citizen .

what the actual fuuuuck .

stop writing matt moreau / cuckstar .

I like it when a guy like him ends up with the girl he needs.

Finaly

there a way to block all the anon comments so they just don't show up on my screen?

but I don't care to listen to the negative comments from people who won't at least put them under a screen name.

ANOTHER WELL CONSTRUCTED BELIEVABLE WELL WRITTEN STORY, IM WORKING MY WAY THROUGH ALL OF YOUR STORIES, SO FAR NOT ONE BAD ONE , 5*****.

I was looking for perverted but I found interesting and relatable.

Why would he marry his mother-in-law? I can see him marrying a young woman.

1st...If I've published a comment before.... Live with it....I know that you Wrote this here story With The Assholes/Bitches Getting Lead Poisoning!!...... If I may add an alternative to this tale of woe in short script!.... Don ends up with Penny, Judy , And Tanya !.....Use your imagination for the Storyline and...Vwella (Ed Carson used that word)...You have a delightful ending.........Thanks. ....★★★★★ WOOF!

I think this is a very nice story. As far as why he married an older woman, why the hell not. A lot of women, and men, don’t really get a good handle on life until they get into their thirties. It’s what they call “experience”. And besides, she wasn’t that much older. What, maybe ten years? One criticism, if I may. Stangstar may know a lot about cars but he evidently doesn’t know much about guns. The recoil of the pistol will not change the point of impact of the bullet. The bullet is already out of the barrel and on its way to the target before the pistol starts to recoil. It’s that fast. Just a nitpicky point, I know. Still, a great story.

The last time I looked the top box-office movies had the following elements:

1. Crazy plot lines.

2. Lots of holes in the plot lines.

3. Unbelieveable, nasty & unredeemable villains.

4. Almost perfect heroes.

5. Always a nice girl at the end.

Stories are much the same way. You don’t need perfection to enjoy either.

Donnie destroyed the life of the woman he should have ended up with, Tanya, by his silence.

A waste of time to read.

I liked this story a lot, sweetie. I like that the characters were honestly-drawn and true to their natures, consistently so. Did it make the story predictable? You betcha. But it also made the story readable, which is a sight more than stories that patch things up at the end with a trite '... and they lived happily ever after' do. This story had the '... and they lived happily ever after.' And perhaps Donnie and Judy do just that, but the ending was a bittersweet happy ending, so it fit this story perfectly.

Thanks for being honest. Thanks for showing actions have consequences, and that consequences matter. Donnie and Judy got a happy ending, Penny and Tanya didn't, and it's fair and it's not fair. Why punish Tanya like that?

Why does anybody get punished who don't deserve it? It happens. It's not fair, and your story was honest about that. And I liked that about your story.

kisses, `phfina

Laid back, calm revenge. Shame about the head shot! Mid spine would be better!

Sometimes I don't think that some of the other commenters read the.same story I did. Maybe I'm just not as intelligent as they are, but I thought this was another great story. Glad I spent the time on it.

In the status of the two, yes, there were two, of the 1968 Mustangs in Steve McQueen's movie Bullitt here is a link to an article in Road and Track magazine -www.roadandtrack.com/car-culture/classic-cars/a15158920/original-bullitt-mustang-steve-mcqueen/. Good story, Penny's name could have be Traci. Signed: BTW

Sorry dude! You missed the mark on this one. Like about 60% no 70% of your stuff!

Honestly I’m sure it’s much easier to be a critic than it is to write this stuff. Keep in mind, my criticism falls within the narrow confines of what I enjoy! Keep up the good work. 👍

But Ive read better ss. The whole slut-got-hers-thru-the-head thing suddenly dropped out of nowhere. Then The End. Left me shaking my head wondering what the hell just happened. The mother-daughter triangle was kinda creepy too.

This was a different sort of plot perfectly executed. As for the "nature/nuture" issue, blaming infidelity on nature is just a lame rationalization, like the "Devil made me do it" or "It was just sex". The story does illustrate why RAACs should never happen...a reconciliation after very serious repentence, yes; but a RAAC, no. All a RAAC tends to do is normalize infidelity and tend to pass that behavior onto the next generation (mommy/daddy overlooked it, so I'll get a pass, too. It's not that big a deal.").

Donnie should have told Tanya. Not telling her was really shitty. I can't help but feel that in the real world Judy would start to resent herself and Donnie because of Penny's murder.

I SO WISH THAT THIS AUTHOR WAS STILL ACTIVE HERE. SUCH A GOOD AUTHOR AND HAS A GREAT SENSE OF HUMOR. LOVE THE DIGS ABOUT MUSTANGS. BUILT MY OWN YEARS AGO. AFTER SPENDING TONS OF MONEY ON IT, GAVE IT TO MY OLDEST. BOUGHT ANTHER MORE FAMILY ORIENTED STYLE AND GAVE THE FAST ONE TO MY OLDER BROTHER. YEARS AGO I HAD BLOWN THE MOTOR IN HIS 56 CHEVY AND EVEN THOUGH I PAID FOR A REBUILD I FELT I STILL NEED TO EVEN THING OUT WITH MY BEST FRIEND AND BROTHER. HE SURE ENJOYED IT!

Decent story.

Thank you for the story when I got to the part about the autopsy I laughed myself silly thank you great read

Mother Nature cab be a formidable opponent with no rules. TK U MLJ LV NV

to err is human nature. very well done, i felt anger and remorse. excelent story telling.

Who buys a house without looking it over?.

You could have done a better job with the ending.Don ending up with his mother in law x jxt kind of fucked up.

As soon as I saw the name Willis Drummond, I was waiting for that line.

I Gave you guys 4 Stars for this Story . I never heard the name of the children or the Sex . I Suggest Carrol for one and Shelby for the other

Read this again, still love that epic line.

"When that urge hits you there's no way to kill it."

"Let me give killing it a try," said Tanya as she leveled the gun she'd been holding straight at Penny.

Really loved it the second time through... One of your best. 5*

Though this line when the MC is talking to Penny on the phone is out of place, at no point was it mentioned that they were video chatting/facetiming/zooming/whatever: "She looked at me strangely and just sighed as I hung up."

Love the story. it is very good. AAAAAA++++++

Loved it!! Best of the best. I really like stories that include a loving relationship between an older woman and a younger man. Ya done good Stangmeister.

I don't know why I keep getting surprised at the quality of your stories. Another one that is a true winner.

Another winner 🏆. You may struggle with nature but you will never beat it.

Ouch!!!!

Way to sort out a problem, the USA way, shoot ‘em!!!

Liked it a lot. 5 stars