All Comments on 'What Lies Beneath'

I adore your stories! I simply can't get enough. And this one was wonderful!

to see you've submitted a new story. I look forward to all of them so much and they never disappoint. Thank you for sharing your wonderful stories and characters with us.

is my favorite thing to see! Especially when it is attached to any story by Pelaam! What a great story...who doesn't LOVE a wonderful Greek Myth!

I loved this story it was beautifully written, and very touching. Love a story that actually has an ending as well. LOL

Wow! I adore your command of the English Language; your gorgeous syntax in descriptions; your captivating plot; and, of course, your heartwarming sex scenes.

I'd personally recommend you change 'Hercules' to 'Herakles' in order to make the atmosphere more Greek-like, but the decision remains yours. For the same reason, I also find it more believable if the breakfast orange juice is substituted with either water or a mixture of milk, barley and honey.

Lovely. A real pleasure to read.

Love it... Good work there...

I liked the read very well. But. But two words stopped the flow: Potatoes and coffee (the color). I just wished you chose something more "greek". But it was a good read at all. Thanks.

Inventive creative captivating passionate inspiring.

Thank you for a fresh new storyline that still pushed us over the end with genuine male love. Keep up your inventive approach!

A different view of the Immortals!