All Comments on 'Werewolf's Mate'

i've always enjoyed the depths of personalities you've added to your characters. you make them more than one dimensional people. good job! :)

AN EDITOR, ASAP!

This was a fabulous read from start to finish....my only criticism is you need someone to proof read it after you have written it. But brilliant non the less.

All your stories are brilliant. Please don’t stop writing. Your romance and now your non-human genres are perfection.

Enjoyed the start of what I hope to enjoy for months to come. Keep up the great work

Oh dear! I see what you mean. I'm terribly sorry for the grammar mistakes - I edited it at 2am. In retrospect: Not a good idea!

I'll proofread and hopefully get some help from an editor before reposting. Thanks for the advice :-)

It's a great beginning to you writing in this genre. I realize that for Literotica this story is complete, but it almost reads like the first chapter of a novel where we find out how they fit their lives together. Then again, that would be for other sites. They met and got together.

Can't wait to read more of this great story.

This story caught my attention from the very beginning! For having little back story, just the there and now, it was super captivating to read for a woman with a werewolf fetish. But I just LOVE the playful banter between them! So often the male is super serious, almost needing to over exaggerate his masculinity but I think a teasing man with a sense of humor is sexy! The grammar issues are obvious but nothing a careful read through can’t fix. Well done!

For your first go at this..... it's great.... i will definitely keep track of this one.... I love the werewolf genre and i think you have a place writting in it.... keep it up

Wow! Thanks everyone! I'm completely overwhelmed with all the wonderful comments and feedback that I've received on this story.

And I have some ideas for an extended version/continuation. I'll just have to dwindle it around in my head for a while before trying to put it into the laptop.

But it seems that there will be more to this story :-)

Ada

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Omg this is such a good piece. I can't wait to read more of this! Please please make a series out of this.

Absolutely incredible! I love the dialogue, the passion, the details! Ill be staying tuned awaiting more from such a talented writer

I have come to love werewolf stories of this type. This is one better entries I’ve read in this vein. Great work all around.

I hope that you can continue with this story. I care for the characters already and would love to read more about them. Please More

So I’m guessing you’re a fan of Lora Leigh’s Breeds series...

You're right! I'm a great fan of both Lora Leigh and Laurann Dohner :-) I wonder what gave me away?

Still, whenever I'm asked to ghost write, I always hope that it will be for one of those :-)

Great story with a different twist!

Having read a comment about the influence from Lora Leighs Breeds, I have to add; this is SO much better written in my opionion! I don't really care for the way most female characters are portrayed in Breeds and the feeling from the dialogue and connection of the characters in your piece is, for me, a higher quality. Please please please give us more!

I just read this story again. The first time I knew it was great. The second I feel even stronger that it’s a great beginning. I already feel affection for both characters. Please continue. I just love it

I hope you continue with Werewolfs, I have enjoyed your take on them.

I love your stories about werewolves. Please keep writing more ♥

Will you please continue this story?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Actually, I am currently writing a longer werewolf story that will be placed in the same universe as this one (probably about Aiden's brother, although things might change during writing). And while working on that one I realised that this one should have a continuation. So, yes, it will come, but not sure when.

Still, I need to finish a romance story for the Winter contest first, before returning to the werewolfs. So, basically, there are too many stories that I want to write and too little time :-)

And again I absolutely love the storyline. I had to comment on your brilliant writing style and hope you can continue to work on many more Werewolf pieces. Thank you for a fantastic read again Ada

MissyB

"This is my second time reading this

And again I absolutely love the storyline. I had to comment on your brilliant writing style and hope you can continue to work on many more Werewolf pieces. Thank you for a fantastic read again Ada

MissyB"

- Oh, wow! I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed my story :-) And yes, there will definitely be more werewolf stories from this author :-)

Can I just say you write the best werewolf stories ever man I'm Inlove with your stories you are very creative I hope you can continue this story as well as your other story *her werewolf protector*its amazing

This is coming from Reina all the way in RSA.... South Africa

"OMG!!!!!! Can I just say you write the best werewolf stories ever man I'm Inlove with your stories you are very creative I hope you can continue this story as well as your other story *her werewolf protector*its amazing

This is coming from Reina all the way in RSA.... South Africa"

- Thank you so much, Reina :-) Wow, I think we're on the same time zone, or really close :-) Amazing to think about :-)

Oh, and, yes, I have thought about expanding this story. I actually have another half-finished werewolf story on my harddrive featuring Aiden's younger brother, but I stopped writing since I felt that Aiden and Serena's story should be told first :-)

Oh, well, there are a few other stories on my tasklist before I come back to the werewolves. Still, I'm totally surprised by all the response I got to this story, since it was my first, clumsy effort :-) I honestly thought I would get some negative response to even suggestion that there was an erection problem with an alpha male. Sorry, haha, I just couldn't resist adding that angle :-)

Loved it

Please, you have to continue this story. You did a great job. Heading back to your story listing to read more.

"Anonymous: Omg awesomeness. Loved it"

- Thanks :-) I'm so glad you liked it :-)

"Anonymous: More please! Please, you have to continue this story. You did a great job. Heading back to your story listing to read more."

- Thanks, yes, I will continue this one, most definitely. I already have a few ideas and I can assure you that she will not be the normal submissive human - oh, well, after reading my stories, I guess you all know that, LOL.

I hope you will enjoy some of my other stories too - although I know that grammar hasn't been the strongest feature in my oldest stories. Ugh, I'm rewriting Undercover right now and well, you can safely say that my writing has changed (hopefully improved too) since that one was written :-)

This is a great story would love to see more added chapters!!!

"More

This is a great story would love to see more added chapters!!!"

- Thanks, and yes, there will be a prolonged version of this. If you have any advice on how it should continue, feel free to tell me :-) I will probably finish rewriting Undercover first, but I haven't quite decided what to start on after that :-)

The banter was just too good. Laughed so hard..am keeping this one for medical tests -

"Do you normally faint when taking blood samples?"

He snorted.

"Depends on how much you're planning to take."

LOL!

Awsm characters, loved their sharp personalities, she's not a wimp, he isn't either..great sassy dialogs. Wish it is turned into a series and not a 1 time story. Loved it!

Really enjoyed this story and hoping theres more to this one. Would love to see how well you can build the characters.

"Super start...but it says The End?

The banter was just too good. Laughed so hard..am keeping this one for medical tests -

"Do you normally faint when taking blood samples?"

He snorted.

"Depends on how much you're planning to take."

LOL!

Awsm characters, loved their sharp personalities, she's not a wimp, he isn't either..great sassy dialogs. Wish it is turned into a series and not a 1 time story. Loved it!"

- LOL! Thanks :-) That dialogue part is my favourite too :-) I'm so glad you liked it :-)

About "THE END": I have started to include that as a rule to all my stories, when I'm not sure how or if I will continue. In this case, I was worried that the story wouldn't be good enough since it was my first attempt at a werewolf story so I kept it short just to be on the safe side. But, since then I've considering prolonging the story and show what happens later, so there will be more to this story - I just have two other stories to complete before I get there :-)

"Hoping for more

Really enjoyed this story and hoping theres more to this one. Would love to see how well you can build the characters."

- Thanks :-) And based on all the wonderful comments that I've received on this and the other werewolf story, I can safely say that I will make this story into a longer version :-) I just hope that you won't be disappointed by the end result, but I'll give it a try anyway :-)

Your writing is awesome! I hope to see a more to this story!

"Omg I love this story

Your writing is awesome! I hope to see a more to this story!"

- Thank you so much :-) And thanks for the reminder. I just finished "Lessons in Love" and started wondering what to write next. Hmm, and your comment has really inspired me to do some more werewolf-stories :-)

a great story well told how aout a follow up story about what happens next

"a great story well told how aout a follow up story about what happens next"

Thanks :-) And that's a great idea and I will definitely do that - not sure when, to be honest. I tend to get new ideas a lot faster than I manage to write them :-) Anyway, I would be very happy to hear suggestions as to what should happen next?

Short, sweet, amazingly written! You could even turn this into a series and I would still read it.

....but I thoroughly enjoyed this story with all the attributes Ada brings to her stories - well written and with great repartee between the 2 main characters among others.

Has it been re-written as I didn't spot any glaring mistakes. Better go back and re-read it. Anyway small errors won't detract from an excellent story. 5 stars

"Not A Werewolf Expert ....

....but I thoroughly enjoyed this story with all the attributes Ada brings to her stories - well written and with great repartee between the 2 main characters among others.

Has it been re-written as I didn't spot any glaring mistakes. Better go back and re-read it. Anyway small errors won't detract from an excellent story. 5 stars"

- Haha, thanks, Ravey19 ❤️ And, yes, it has been edited since I first posted it - I'm always terribly impatient and post before I should.... uhm, well, you probably know that by now, LOL

A great story, i hope there next story that tell what happens next

Please keep going!! We need more! It seems like it only begun!

please finish this story

Vielleicht nicht die originellste Idee, aber die Umsetzung ist einfach klasse. Gelungene Dialoge und die erforderliche Erotik ergeben eine sehr gelungene Geschichte.

Please more of this story. This is so hot and love the characters.

More please!

Please finish!! this is my second time coming to this story only realizing I read it already but reread it cause it was so good!!

For someone who claimed not to really know what they were doing, you did a hell of a job. Excellent short story that I'd love to see expanded just a little bit (at least)

To LiterKnight from Ada Stuart:

Haha, honestly, this was my first attempt in this genre. And I was so nervous when I posted it.

Still, I wrote "Mating the Omega" based on this one, and gosh, it was No 1 on Amazon UK yesterday. It makes me wonder if I should keep on writing werewolf-stories, :-)

Definitely keep writing sexy werewolf tales for us…please!

To Pinkbullsfan13 from Ada Stuart:

Don't worry :-) I already have three new werewolf stories that I'm working on. One of them I plan to post for the Halloween contest so I hope you'll give that one a chance :-)

Amazing! love their interaction with each other

Wonderful!

What a scorcher

I loved this story!!! I’d only wish for a second part or a short series of this story.

That was interesting ;)

Needs a follow up. Enjoyed the story and want more.

U should continue the story, don't leave it at that

More please! Loved it