All Comments on 'Wendy Pt. 03'

What a wonderful story and mix of characters!

Have read all three parts of this erotic fantasy. Although all three are a bit too long for storyline and character development, almost repetitious (as you say, can’t please everyone). Wendy is a delightful caricature both the initially described serious side of her character and the raunchy hedonist that materializes in chapters 2 and 3. No complaints; it is what it is and well written with exception of the sex scenes, which is what the story “Wendy” is all about — too short/abbreviated; typically a short paragraph (just a few lines) of sex (someone, usually Wendy) enjoys an instantaneous orgasm and so on — the sex scenes are never erotically drawn out even a bit to match the hedonism.

This is a really fun story. The sex is great but I enjoy the storyline with it. Thank you

Keep them coming this series is fantastic.

Yet another excellent story. The plot was fabulous, well described and made me very horny.

Well done TA.

S

Not crazy about the guy sucking cock stuff but awesome just the same! Five stars and a favorite point!

Looking forward to the next chapter.