by Ada Stuart
very well written...and HOT HOT HOT! :)
I can't wait to read more!
I really like your stories and your style of writing. Definitely keep the stories coming. Can't wait for the next installment
Oh - your talent and humor are showing - quite well and much appreciated.
With Very High Regard
finally ch. 02 is here! dun make us wait too long for the next! your stories are goddamn sexy!
Can't wait for the next one.
If you ever got any book published please let me know, I will go buy them.
and absolutely love the chemistry between these two characters. Keep up the fantastic work
This gets better as it goes along, she needs to allow him to truly love her.
Your writing is wonderful. The fact of writing as a women, rather then a male
permits a warmer, softer,more erotic, and less pornografick view of love,
rather then of just sex. Have you written any novels,and if so where are theyavailable for purchase?
Thank you for your kind words :-) I must admit that this story is one of my personal favourites so I'm happy that you liked it :-)
And I'm really flattered that you ask if I'm published because I'm not (yet) - except for my story "Christmas lover" that was published on Amazon earlier this year without my permission. It's removed now so my writings are (as far as I know) only available here on Literotica.
But I might give publication a try once I've improved my grammar :-) Right now I'm still learning and trying to improve :-)
I read forced entry first. I hope you make a series out of it.
Your other stories are nicely detailed and very well written. Reading this story got me soo hot and bothered that I had to wake up my husband at 2am for some action!!
Thank you
Please keep writing
Your newest fan
You have excelled yourself Ada this is really good! I am most impressed. Great build up then submission. Well done
Your descriptions of sex are excellent; nice buildup to the story, also. Five stars +