All Comments on 'Watching TV Rots Your Brains Pt. 03'

Fantastic! Great story and a great series. Thanks for sharing your stories with us.

Which story had deck in it? I remember him from something.

Comment forthcoming. This is most definitely an all day sucker best saved for the weekend.

A very entertaining yarn, more twists than an English country lane!

Said it before and I’ll say it again JimBob44 knows how to write dialogue, not the stiff, wooden and laughably pretentious verbal diarrhoea that constitutes language in most authors submissions. This is how real people talk, all the stutters and stumbling make it real, general conversation is not iambic pentameter, it isn’t perfect it’s messy, in attempting to write perfect speech authors effectively limit their characters, making them merely cardboard cutouts, they are flat and unrealistic.

JimBob44’s use of vernacular can require some perseverance but the rewards are plentiful.

Okay I’ll admit it I’m a fan, sue me.