by JimBob44
I find the most impressive thing about your stories is how you keep track of your cast of thousands. There were a couple of jumps in the story that I found confusing. But I enjoyed this and am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks
I like bizarre. The family is bizarre and random. Keep going!
Personally, I have trouble keeping up with so many names. Not saying this is a flaw.
Well, this is just a jumbled mess. Do you think there’s a plot or is he trolling us?
but not worth the trouble. Ignorant people don't keep their money long, especially inherited or lottery money. Little bursts and episodes of drama and suspense, surrounded by years of drudgery and complacency. What great lives your characters live. Not even worth dismissing. I'm sure you tried, so did I. Empty. But thanks for the effort.
5 stars, great story so far, looking forward to the rest. Happy to see you writing again, Jim Bob.
This is a whole pile of great new characters, to store in the vault. 5 again