by JimBob44
Very good story thank you for writing this I really enjoyed it!!!
Absolutely fantastic! I love your stories and style of writing. Thanks for sharing your stories with us.
I would really like to read more about Butch's feminization. Would love to read about her going on hrt and having an operation for a nice set of boobs. Yvette giving her a couple of hot soapy enemas before the strapon sex would also be great.
Not my favorite story of JB's, mainly because of the topic. But I read it because be always delivers. Someone earlier said it best. He writes good stories about real people, who just happen to have sex. Always ready for more of his tales.
Jedd
Loved your story, very well written .. I would love to know a woman like Yvette .. their relationship does not me close to my heart and what I dream of .. thank you,. TG Tiffany ..
Well written, good grammar & storyline. No violence, no name calling, no humiliation and no other men involved. Excellent.
A romantic story of 2 fortunate people who meet each other and click. If only real life were like that.... *****
very well written...i love your style of writing. I'm going to go look at the rest of your stories...i have a feeling i will not be disappointed!
I think the thing I like best about your stories is how your empathy for all the characters -- even those who have unpleasant traits -- is imbued and comes through. (And I'm certainly not classifying either of the two main characters here as having unpleasant traits!) It allows me as a reader to really sink inside them and see the world from their perspective. I'm probably three quarters of the way through your stories at this point, and there's nothing I can imagine that will keep me from reading the rest. Thank you so much for sharing your writing here!
I am a little surprised that the two did not realize who each were. I kept waiting for that drama. But I love love so I loved this story.