All Comments on 'Vodka: Mint Chocolate'

by JimBob44

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steeltiger01steeltiger01about 1 year ago

A shirt, somewhat sad story with a sad, surprisingly life-like ending.

johntcookseyjohntcookseyabout 1 year ago

That was depressing. A friend’s wife died like that several years back. Passed out from alcohol/drugs in a pool. Husband thought it was depression related suicide, but the coroner charitably labeled it an accident for the family’s sake. On a different note, I must say that though I’m well aware of ‘water sports’, I’ve never heard of a peegasm! I thought I’ve heard it all! It’s good to know I can still be surprised. Thanks for another original and entertaining story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A sad but not uncommon ending. But that's how you write things; hot sex all wrapped up in realistic scenes. Unfortunately these things happen. As usual for you, 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great writing as always. I have always been a big fan of your work in this category, but the last two have been a smidge depressing. Still great, but downers. I'm sure you'll get to something a little more upbeat at some point. For what it's worth, Terri and Pam are my all time favorite characters on this site!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great short story with hot steamy sex! Loved it-5 stars! Thanks Jimbob44.

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69about 1 year ago

Too sad of an ending!

TiredOldMan502TiredOldMan502about 1 year ago

When I saw that JB had posted a few stories, I was all set. I got myself a po' boy, and a can of. my area's version Gratchley's. Then came that ending. Nice departure from your usual tales.

KenfromIndyKenfromIndyabout 1 year ago

Very brief so I assume will be more about this in other stories when the desire hits you of course! 😁

Overall enjoyable reading time.

Please do keep writing for your enjoyment and I will keep reading.

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