by JimBob44
That was depressing. A friend’s wife died like that several years back. Passed out from alcohol/drugs in a pool. Husband thought it was depression related suicide, but the coroner charitably labeled it an accident for the family’s sake. On a different note, I must say that though I’m well aware of ‘water sports’, I’ve never heard of a peegasm! I thought I’ve heard it all! It’s good to know I can still be surprised. Thanks for another original and entertaining story.
A sad but not uncommon ending. But that's how you write things; hot sex all wrapped up in realistic scenes. Unfortunately these things happen. As usual for you, 5/5 stars.
Dewey Cheatham
Great writing as always. I have always been a big fan of your work in this category, but the last two have been a smidge depressing. Still great, but downers. I'm sure you'll get to something a little more upbeat at some point. For what it's worth, Terri and Pam are my all time favorite characters on this site!
When I saw that JB had posted a few stories, I was all set. I got myself a po' boy, and a can of. my area's version Gratchley's. Then came that ending. Nice departure from your usual tales.
Very brief so I assume will be more about this in other stories when the desire hits you of course! 😁
Overall enjoyable reading time.
Please do keep writing for your enjoyment and I will keep reading.