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All Comments on 'Twisted Shopping Trip'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
1*

Swingerstory+groupsexorgy=1*

Phantom1945Phantom1945almost 13 years ago
Good story but ...

Your typography sucks more than Mary and Lisa combined. Get a proofreader. Thanks, and keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Ugh

Impossible to read. Maybe you should jerk off before you write so you use both hands on the keys. Ridiculously bad spelling and grammar made this a failure...

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Couldn't stop laughing at this infantile mess. Did you even proofread it?

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