All Comments on 'Truth and Lies Ch. 01'

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HamsterHamsterover 8 years ago
There We Go Again!

This time it is Tiffany with the 38DD's. Women with gigantic boobs are as rare as guys with 9 inch dicks. 1 in 10,000. Why insist on detracting from the reality of the story with what is too fantastic even for a fantasy. By now you know how I feel about unreasonable boob size in these stories. Let's just be realistic about the physical construction of our heroes and heroines and let the fantasy be about what happens.

RasmatRasmatover 8 years ago
We all know...

The road to Hell is paved with good intentions. Of course they will do it again and I hope to read about it soon.

The story will stand alone. But, IMHO, it is better as the beginning of a multipart series. Each of the four would benefit from further development, fleshing out. It's not my story, though. Please keep writing. Thanks.

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