by Pelaam
I do believe that you did a better job then Shakespear did with his verison. You write the most moving and heartwarmning stories I've read. Keep up the great writing.
is that the new buzz word? sorry, but i didn't like this one. i didn't think it was on par with your other stories.
There is no plot, just sex. This tale is bland, it has no spice. Usually you do better.
Not your best. Characters are delineated but not well developed - nor is the situation. I think the story is far larger in scope than what you allotted.