by TryAnything
Really naughty and really nice! I love Henry sucking and fucking his stepson. I'd love to see some kissing and holding between them. Maybe they can send that Ginger Clam on a vacation! Henry brings back memories of my friends naughty Dad when I was 15 and he taught me about sucking Cock and the beauty of man on young man love!
I liked the story I loved the parts where they both explore their sexuality and learn to enjoy each other. I did not get hard but enjoyed it.
An edging delight. Good writer. Do you have other similar? I also love cd/wife humiliation stories.
Can I make a suggestion? Write this in first person (I suggest the stepson) then the reader can relate and names arent necessary. The reader would love to be in the story, not just on the outside looking in. And if you have to use names, you can use more endearing, intimate, personal names. Otherwise, a well-written story. If you need and editor, I'm your guy.
This is perfection. Don't change anything. Just please follow up with another chapter. You're a genius.