by poison_alice
Great start Alice! Enjoyable read, lots of spoilers, looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you for writing this - it's very well written with a romantic side too!
Bravo!
Would love to read more.
Hope you continue with this one.
I hope she is not turning into Alana #2. If her thinking pattern is anything like Alana in the next chapters it will really be a turn of for me.
I am liking this much better than "Slavery"!! This is really good!!! Can't wait to read more!
I agree with anon who wrote..So Far So Good comment if she turns into another Alana I will be done with this story. At the moment though I like Elias and hope she will be a character worth cheering for!
You have done it again! I love this story so far! Curious as to where your going to be taking it. I like the premise a lot more than Slavery. Can't wait for the next installment!
damn i love this story its soo yummy!!! cant wait 4 the next 1! freat job ily
I agree I like this story too, but please don't abandon "Slavery." I really think that with Slavery you could take it to the next level. Please keep writing both. But if you have to choose, go back to Slavery.
Thanks
Please keep writing both of your series.... They are awesome!
She has a goddess-blessed mission to save him from himself. If she must sacrifice herself to him, she will! Keep rolling Alice! ;)
Sad but captivating all at once. I like it. Slavery is my favorite out of the two stories you are writing, I can't wait to read more of both though.
Haunting and beautiful and amazing! And hot as hell! Please please please write some more. evonna x
I absolutely love this story please don't leave it incomplete.