All Comments on 'The Priestess Ch. 01'

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MaynessMaynessover 11 years ago

Great start Alice! Enjoyable read, lots of spoilers, looking forward to the next chapter.

NiccesNiccesover 11 years ago
Like it

......I think it is a good story so far. I hope you will continue

Harry LegHarry Legover 11 years ago
Loved it.

Fantastic story so far. Wonderfully written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Super Story!

Thank you for writing this - it's very well written with a romantic side too!

Bravo!

Would love to read more.

piedeliciousnesspiedeliciousnessover 11 years ago
Very well done and enjoyable to read

Hope you continue with this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
So far so good.

I hope she is not turning into Alana #2. If her thinking pattern is anything like Alana in the next chapters it will really be a turn of for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yum

Hottest one I've read so far, thank you :) keep them coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow!!

I am liking this much better than "Slavery"!! This is really good!!! Can't wait to read more!

willieonewillieoneover 11 years ago
Mmm!

I agree with anon who wrote..So Far So Good comment if she turns into another Alana I will be done with this story. At the moment though I like Elias and hope she will be a character worth cheering for!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Oh Alice....

You have done it again! I love this story so far! Curious as to where your going to be taking it. I like the premise a lot more than Slavery. Can't wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
damn

damn i love this story its soo yummy!!! cant wait 4 the next 1! freat job ily

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yes this is good, . . .

I agree I like this story too, but please don't abandon "Slavery." I really think that with Slavery you could take it to the next level. Please keep writing both. But if you have to choose, go back to Slavery.

Thanks

TexanCowgirlTexanCowgirlover 11 years ago
Great story!

Please keep writing both of your series.... They are awesome!

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 11 years ago
Really good!

She has a goddess-blessed mission to save him from himself. If she must sacrifice herself to him, she will! Keep rolling Alice! ;)

WinterHowlingWinterHowlingover 11 years ago
Heart

Sad but captivating all at once. I like it. Slavery is my favorite out of the two stories you are writing, I can't wait to read more of both though.

panda1870panda1870over 11 years ago
love iiiiitttt!!!

Please please write some more!

Its freaken awesome :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wowee.

Haunting and beautiful and amazing! And hot as hell! Please please please write some more. evonna x

xxspicyshrimpxxxxspicyshrimpxxover 10 years ago
too great to waste

I absolutely love this story please don't leave it incomplete.

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