All Comments on 'The Mission'

Well written, enjoyable. Looking forward to more, either a continuation of this story or another separate tale. Thanks for writing.

Thank you.

Great writing SCORPIO! I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed this fine tale of espionage. The plot is implausible but, who gives a fuck, it succeeded very well for me! May I suggest you make this a series? Pete.

This one has a different feel or pace than your others. Very much a military feeling. Quick, clean, no frills and all business... Will we see more of Shannon?

Don't really know what to make of this story.

states (States)

I had completed MY MISSION . . . the MISSION WAS HERS

I had (been) debriefed

KNOWING I would get three weeks off when and KNOWING

Andrews (Air Force base)

(CIA headquarters in) Langley, Virginia

GOOD FOOD waiting for me as the debriefing began. Three months of crappy FOOD is enough. I needed some GOOD FOOD

The PLAN we would be using WAS HERS. I GOT TO PLAN A SIGNIFICANT PART (IT SOUNDS LIKE A JOINTLY PLANNED MISSION!!!!)

soviet union (Soviet Union)

(WHILE STANDING AT THE FRONT COUNTER) I flushed the paper and went to room 321 (IT WAS VITAL THAT I MAINTAIN THE HIGHEST LEVEL OF SECRECY BECAUSE NO NONE COULD KNOW OF THE EXISTENCE OF ROOM NUMBER 321!!!!)

someone inside and inside the shower (IF A PERSON WAS IN THE SHOWER AND THE SHOWER WAS IN THE BATHROOM, WOULDN’T THAT PERSON ALSO BE IN THE BATHROOM????)

someone taking care of their after-shower ritual (his/her)

Honey (honey)

they might expect (it would seem natural)

HER MOUTH to a full erection. I began pumping in and out of HER MOUTH. She didn't move anything except HER MOUTH

HER FACE and began fucking in and out of HER FACE

her self (herself)

entre' (entree)

with Shannon and I (me)

half-way (halfway)

it's (its)

Good job with the intrigue and a hero that takes care of his women, not matter how he receives them.