All Comments on 'The Broussard Sisters Ch. 04'

one story line (Teddy) too many and there are more errors. Please get an editor.

This is just plain fun to follow. I'm loving the story lines, but I just hope jimbob hasn't bitten off more than he can chew. I REALLY want to get to the end of this story eventually and not be left hanging....

Are we going to see a new chapter soon?

I agree with the other poster that the Teddy story is one too many. It is really great, and I love that it is complex, but it is really hard work reading it.

Other than that this is very impressive. I am glad I am reading it some time after it was posted so I don't have to wait for the next chapter!

I really enjoyed the story as well as the others and how a lot of them go together and tell different perspectives. It was kinda confusing to keep up with somne of your stories, still great though!

Still just enjoying the daylights out of this, lol! I want three girlfriends that all get along and love each other! Hehe

Sorry, but this just seemed like a filler chapter.

Seems Paul's life just became more of a juggling act with the addition of Pam to his 'harem'. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.