by JimBob44
Fantastic as always!! I just love your stories. Please keep up the good work! Thanks again.
every person who has been screwed by the self-acclaimed elite and their "sickofant" (sic) followers should have a sex goddess who can help them! what a great start for JB44 readers.
Not my favorite story of yours. Certainly the pegging and cum swallowing aren't my favorite topics; I don't care if it is my own. But as usual you write a riveting story, even when it is a flash tale. You write about real life with real people in real situations who use real vernacular, not grammar out of English comp. Get the feeling I think your writing is real? Oh, and then you squeeze in wicked hot monkey sex. I know that some will bitch about this story like they always do, but really, what more could we ask for? Another great story by a great writer. Even if the topic didn't plow my garden, you still get 5 from me.
Jedd
Thanks for the fun read! Always enjoy your stories -- just like Forrest Gump's chocolates, you never know what you're gonna get.... ;-)
Although it's a flash story, you really did a lot of character build and development. I would love to see more tales with either Brandon (learning and teaching new things) and Nina (taking charge and going where no one has gone before).
5/5
Great, tight little story, a real high school fantasy. Actually made me remember something that happened a long time ago. JB44 always rocks the house.