All Comments on 'Swill'

The enjoyable world that you've given us just keeps expanding; I'm grateful. There are so many tales of normal (or at least regularly abnormal) folks that you've given us - it's like a visit to your odd, comfortable hometown. Thanks.

Interesting story!

5

What's the difference between Gratchley's Golden Light Beer and having sex in a small boat?

Nothing, they're both fucking close to water.

Great story, 5*.

“My hiney hole hurts“

A good life.

Bravo! Very well done. Thanks for that.

Decent premise.

But there's no smooth progression. No details. Moves ahead much too fast. Not the least bit of seduction needed. No real objection to anything that needed to be discussed and/or overcome. No way to discern passage of time.

And that's only page 1.

That's as far as I got.

Disappointing.

Two stars.

Keep on a 'writen.

I would love to hear more about the daughters.

So happy to see your universe expand, looking forward to more of this family!

Great story! Loved it as always.

Good as usual well written story! SHOCKing in your authors note no pulled in characters. Entertaining reading and a few laughs as well! Thank you.

Please keep writing and I will keep reading!

Great story. Sorry to see what happened to Greta, but you set it up nicely at the beginning. It would help if there were a few more scene delineation markers...