by Ghostwalker
This intriguing little short story offers a nice antidote to the recriminaton-filled hate sex between exes I've seen here and there.
There's a bunch of questions I have but I'll keep em short and sweet...
What''s up with Dan and Wife #2?
What busted Dan and Molly up before?
Have they answered the issues that did?
Can they move past all that and make it work together or just be fuck buddies around raising their kids?
This could fall under romantic as well. I hope you'll revisit this one a write another chapter. It might even go to 3 chapters.
Thanks in advance.
If a couple were THIS compatible, why did they ever get divorced. It seems like a cheap plot gimmick.
A second chapter would fill out the story and fill in the plot holes.
Having learned through the error of their ways after each having a poor 2nd marriage,the feeling here is that wedding bells will eventually ring for them again.They now realize, and appreciate, that they are perfect sex partners,already share children together,and we can figure where she wants this to go by her enthusiasm/desire to have another baby with him. (He outright tells her he's in love with her!) ~ Some nifty,descriptive sex in this hopeful, feel-good story. ~ Nicely done! ~ 5+
Re-coupling
Molly visits her ex ostensibly because her new husband is away and she wants adult companionship. In realisty, this is a surprise attack to get inseminated. Women can be cold and calculating in their sex - play. I think the story might have been more realistic if Molly hadn't divulged her hidden agenda.
Don’t like cheaters and she’s a cunt for cheating and wanting to get knocked up by her lover and have her husband raise it as his. A shocking betrayal
Scores 2/5, the only tale of yours to do so thus far
2/5
2/5 sloppy storyline
They divorced as they were both pushing too long hours to advance their careers, yet both found time (they did not have to keep their marriage) to remarry... and after the while they go for another child behind their spouses backs? Either make it 750 with no backstory or draw characters that make sense