by manyeyedhydra
I love the direction you've taken poor old Phil; what other delights and horrors will he encounter in Hell???
Well I’m surprised you continued with chapters any further, however it seem’s like there is potential in pro-longing Phil’s death for a while yet.
Good job.
I love these stories and was personally dissapointed when I thought they had ended, I actually felt sad when Phill "died", I almost hope for a happy ending now :P Nevertheless I hope you can keep this up...this is definately one of the hottest series' on Literotica. 5/5
Ha! So he lives! I suspected Verde may have had something in mind. I'm impressed with your ability to continue the story from where it left off in the previous instalment without it becoming dull in any way. I'm curious to see what Phil encounters in Hell. Will he try to get back to the living world? Love it! - ann
glad Phil is still alive and kicking. I think the character of Verde has some type feelings for him in her own way maybe he might have better luck then the other male leads in your story maybe a true happy ending and not a fucking to death.
I love this series and always hoped you'd find some way to save him.
The method you found is great and, while I know you said you have other ideas you want to try, I do hope you find a little time to keep this seris going; you are by far the best succubus writer I've had the pleasure to read.
Thank you once again, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter =D
Great suprise that Phil is still alive. Can't wait for the next chapter. also can't wait t\o read your other future stories they've all been great.
What a great twist! This continues to be my favorite series on the whole site- your talents as an author are much appreciated!
Great story, thanks for letting Phil live. Looking forward to more stories from you.
I didn't anticipate Phil surviving 105. I bet he doesn't know whether he should be glad he's still alive or terrified as to what will happen to him next
Nurse Honey is another interesting succubus variation. Can't wait to see just how many more there are lurking in their home dimension
Love the twist, manyeyedhydra. I can't wait to see what will happen next to him...lucky guy in my personal opinion. Then again, I love your work and I can't wait to see any of your next stories. Good job, as always.
i didnt think that phil would be coming back for round 2 but u pulled it off. you are a great writer manyeyedhydra and i cant wait to see if phil can weasel his way out of this one
Great story.
Didn't expect this turn for part 6 after what happened in 5. This Honey nurse is getting interesting.
Can't wait to finish reading the other chapters also.
I really liked that he survived. You could have cut this off after the first story, but you didn't. I appreciate that and encourage you to write more.
You are a terrific writer.
Wow just your descriptions of nurse honey will stay with me for a long long time I'm certain of that. Amazing stories and a brilliant imagination, keep it up man.
I am so glad to just be starting this series. I've read 1-6 in a matter of half an hour. I can't stop!
These stories are everything good in the succubi fantasy world ❤❤❤
Loved all that! Really! Started to read the first chapter earlier today (just a chapter to pass the time really) and ended up reading six of them! In a row! Despite it all being gruesome (people die from being fucked to death here), you can't help but being drawn to those sweet succubi. (Especially Verdé.) I love the way you described the act. You did not only dwell on the technical details (his member got pushed into her rectum - ratatatata - fuck! Done!), but also add a debth of feeling and what he is sensing. I also like how you manage to present the succubi (who are evil and kill people and suck them dry) as characters you feel still drawn to. What should I say? I absolutely loved it! (Oh, just seen that there is already a chapter 107 ...dammit, its late! Should I still read it? Like now? ... Of course!) So: keep it up!
(Btw. you keep writing "teats" ... its "tits", "teats" remind me of "treats", which they can be at times, but still ...)