All Comments on 'Something Afoot'

It's always good to get a new story from you. Thanks.

Great job!

Any Male would have push is cock in as deep as it would go theb shot his cum deep up inside her pussy

This is not my kink but, the story was so hot maybe it would become one of my kinks. Great job and sounds like there is plenty of places to go wit this storyline.

Thank you for sharing.

Great stuff. Keep up the great writing in this genre.

.. awaiting the follow-on where Gina and Vera have their way with him.

Wow what a start for a footjob saga, please if possible write a sequal to this one including Gina giving a sexy stockinged footjob...!

Now I'd like to see a sequel where actual sex is involved. Maybe even a threesome with Gina and Vera.

Please write more, you have a talent, I love nylon feet too !!

This story was amazing the focus to detail was superb flawless and in my opinion unbeatable

Now Gina and Vera need to have a threesome with him...

My first thought when she mentioned the foot job was that she didn't promise anything about dry humping either. I don't have a foot fetish, so having them escalate to that instead od her leaving would have been nice.

Maybe his sister enjoys one of his foot rubs too much and tells Vera about it? Vera could tease by asking him for a foot rub for both her & Becky, leading to Vera pointing out his hard on and telling Becky they shouldn’t leave him like that, especially after Becky came from his last foot rub. Becky relents and lets them go further while she enjoys her foot rub and watches. Just sharing my imagination, I thoroughly enjoy your writing style & stories. Thank you!

And the dialog is well done. Sure would have liked to have some tit involvement. The instructions from his sister were: no blowjob, and no handjob. Nothing about boob job. She certainly could have teased him with them. And she could have played with them herself while she was playing with her pussy -- describing how firm they were, how sensitive they were, how hard the nipples were, etc.

And you meant DRAWERS, not DRAWS.

It's possible it's entirely regional, but "draws" and "drawers" are used interchangeably hereabouts. My editor at the time mentioned it as well, but I overruled him. LOL

Holy shit, this story made me feel it like i was there... this deserves/needs a 2nd chapter(or more...) so many ways to make this story grow....

5 stars!(because 10 stars wasn't an option)

Aww, you faked me out. I totally thought the girl Vera was going to tell her about was going to be Vera! But the narrator's a good boy who plays by the rules...mostly.

Loved Vera, loved the tease, loved the photo she carefully showed him couldn't be used for blackmail. Nicely done.

Just pretty stupid, really....