by nikki_2021
You've got a really 'happy' feeling writing style, that makes all the characters feel like they are enjoying themselves. This one was super hot; the idea of the kids just a few feet away, with no idea of whats going on... *laugh*
Great story from start to finish. One of the best I've read on lit.
This was a great story. Started reading a few disney related ones and I like this the most as it brings memories back of my trip to disneyland and a few fantasies. lol. this was gold! keep it up.
A good bit of erotic writing. The sex scenes were well developed without the usual cheap porn descriptions. Thanks for writing.
A nice, happy, hot little story. Should leave readers both smiling and horny.
I used to live about 6 blocks from Disneyland. This was back in the time when you could get a General Admission ticket for $20. I went there often and could usually find a girl there that would fool around on the property and in some of the darker rides. I never got to fuck a princess though. Brings back some hot memories. I liked the story.
Great story. In Disneyland’s earliest days, an admission came with an assortment of graded tickets and the most popular attractions required an “E” ticket… which, of course, were the scarcest. While those tickets remained in colloquial memory, the experience of being with a girl like Lauren was called an “E ticket ride”.
I have a thing for Mary Poppins and when I went to Disney in Florida a long time ago I was so start struck that I couldn't get the courage to meet her. I was completely blown away to see my child hood friend in real life.
Wow! …… the ‘other side’ of Sleeping Beauty. Exceptional again 😍
Bob….. rtr