by Tx Tall Tales
thanks for the story makes me want to find a trainer and lose some weight. Mike from Texas
This series is just SOOOOOOOO HOT! I think the wife has guilty conscience, she wanted that guy and maybe played more than she is letting on...Time will tell as you continue this wonderful series!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm at a loss for the proper words. Just know I will hate when you end it. By the way, Is the wife cheating too.
this is great! i want to know where the wife got her inspiration! what happens next with jenny?
They make such a good couple, I hope that they can really get together. Fucking well written and really hot sex. Thanks for the rush.....Rich
If I had to guess why there's so few comments on this story I would venture that in this series the lead has minimal or no remorse for his out of bounds behavior. I know the author can do that so it's apparently a choice. In this series his lack of hesitation , trepidations can be borderline sociopathic without even considering the narcissism angle making it hard to identify with the leading characters. I'm quibbling however and glossing over strengths that you have as an author that others have covered heretofore . Thank you so much for the pleasure given in this and other stories.
I'm getting a bit bloody bored of you begging for feedback. Just write the story already and let people comment how - and if - they want !
The story is fine. Your begging is not.
I like the build up in this series. A little more remorse at times from the sister in law might make it more believable, but a lot of authors overdue the guilt so who knows.
Not bad for someone who wasn't allowed to go "all he way." Makes one wonder what will happen when he's finally granted unrestricted use of her body.
Well, there is a lot to like in a TTT story. As full a character development as the story format allows, hot scenes, a sympathetic sense of writing.
However, this particular story has one of the most illogical premises ever.
>"I'm dying to catch the Nicole Kidman movie. "
Said absolutely no one, ever. Now I know that Jenny is simply unrealistic.
Original, very well written, super exciting!!!
Congratulations!
When they finally have no-holds barred sex, the fucking will be fantastic, the way Jenny is gradually shifting the goalposts