All Comments on 'Semper Invictus Ch. 04 - Neck Deep'

ST1956 rides again!

5

5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ as always from this phenomenal writer

As usual your stories are some of the better ones on the website.

I enjoy reading them and hope you continue to keep us entertained with the different ideas you create.

Excelent!

very good read!

Really good story with a much different theme than ST usually writes. I like the ending. It reminds me of the ending to a Star Trek TNG episode in the first season where creatures took over Starfleet personnel. The ending there was a signal from one of the dying creatures out into deep space, leaving the door open to a sequel. Perhaps the Arctic and Antarctic creatures are ST’s way of leaving this story open to a sequel.

As always, good stuff! Thanks for all the entertainment you provide! 5*

Love this story line waiting for the next chapter

Thanks for sharing your imagination! Much more fitting to a Sci-Fi category than a Loving Wives but it was still a good story. Guess Loving Wives gets more readership than Sci-Fi but LW shouldn't be the catch-all for hard to categorize stories. Cuckold belongs in Fetish; Sci-Fi belongs in Sci-Fi; BBC belongs in Interracial Sex and so on & so on...... Just my Soapbox on/about Literotica!!!!!! Again, thanks for the saga!!!!

Excellent story!

One point. This "war" came and went so fast, I almost missed it. They crossed transectors, he was blown away to 'somewhere', then he was returned, and everything was over. Strange war. A lot of buildup, then over. I was a professional soldier for close to 30 years. A few dead, burnt bodies might have made my day.

Otherwise, really good.

5 stars and i hope this is not the last chapter

Damn, I sometimes feel empty when you story ends! Damn! Deserving of more stars but definitely getting 5 BIG FAT JUICY STARS! Thanks again ST.

Except in the imagination of a great story teller. Thanks.

1 Star

Trash

-26thNC

Definitely not the same ole same ole some complain about. 5 stars from the Dreamer.

WOW!

Excellent!!! 5* x 4

I have added "The Five Rings" to my reading list. - thanks! (ref - Miyamoto Musashi)

Great story. Thanks.

Great series, fine story. Thanks for writing.

I found it trite and silly, and without any substance. Quite the cartoon. I was waiting for Batman and Robin to appear. I hope your success continues. And thanks for the effort.

Awesome!!!!!!!

Incredible very very imaginative! I loved it a very strong 5 star rating!

Loved this part of the story, and having Ewan MacGregor as one of the other protectors was brilliant! All hail, Obi-Wan Kenobi! ⚔️

It was nice to see that Mr. Miyagi's skills have not been forgotten. We have to wonder it there will be a final confrontation between the two protagonists.

Awesome story line hope it continues. Ur work is appreciated n enjoyed

Great story, Well done! I still find it a sad testimony of our times that you need to put a snowflake warning at the beginning of your stories.

Great Sci-Fi. Great story, as well. As usual, you did yourself proud. The Bear approves. 5 stars. Watch out, David Weber.

The BEAR

Glad to see Captain Picard, aka the Director, giving his Number One, Svan, his usual command..."make it so!" Great story and a very entertaining read. Thank you.

A great series, well written. Highly recommend

I've read Many stories in My Lifetime! Some Well let's just say "Wipeout". Then there are Authors who bring their Stories to life (like watching rain hitting water, it comes alive and Dances) To Coin The Words. "Let's Dance & not Wipeout. You Sir make your Stories come alive and Dance. 5 🌟👍😁

Great series! Very enjoyable read. Thank-you ST

Wow! Needs to be on the silver screen.

Ed

Great story. Thanks so much. I’ve really enjoyed your stories about Justice too. You have a real talent in the sci/fi genre. Please give us more.

Great story. Left an opening for another series should you wish to write a follow up.

Stupid bitch Noei is worried about saving dick Rick rather than doing her fucking job

Nicely done! I enjoyed reading all of the this story, 5/5. 😀 If you do add onto it at some future date, I'll be happy to dive in for more. But for now, I need to log out. I'm probably going to investigate the story that you wrote about a girl named Houston. I'm curious to see what you did there for obvious reasons. 🤔

Another good series. Enjoyed it through non-stop reading. Now, on to the next story.

You're the greatest ST! Another 5 BIG ASS STARS, again!

“…For now”. Tease. So let me guess. You’re going to back up, regroup and come back at it from both flanks. Close? Well I, for one, hope you do decide to give us another chapter or three. This is one of those stories I love and hate. Love it because it’s such a great story and hate it because once I start it I can’t put it down until it’s finished. Anyway, thanks for a great story, ‘Tramp, I enjoyed the hell out it.

5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I read it. I issued NO grade.

It wasn't worth while for myself.

So you Far out readers make the grade for saddletramp.

I really enjoy just about everything you write, but your forays into sci fi are my favorite. Nope, Ryan Caldwell and justice O’Peace are. Anyway, loved it, hoping there might be more, at a later date?