All Comments on 'Semper Invictus Ch. 03 - Family Ties'

Wow!!! Looking forward to the next one!

Ah so different but then that is why you are one of the best Look fwd to no 4 (jaybee186)

Submit the new chapter as soon as you can. I like reading ALL of your stories

Some connentations to Ghost Busters...lol, love your work mate and looking forward to the next chapter.

Cheers

Excellent chapter and story!

5

Nice.

Great read 5+

As always with Saddletramp , a 5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ chapter in an awesome story.

This is a really awrsome storyline pls continue it. Very entertaining well thought out. Keep up the great work n looking for the next installment.

I do hope many more are coming

I’m usually not a big fan of the sci-if genre (though Burnt Redstone has some fantastic stories in it). However, this series is excellent.

First you have a great story going and I can't wait for more chapters to come out. You are very talented writer and love reading your story's.

Ssa

This story is awesome. keep it coming

First time I have seen this story but it really has a sci fi ring to it. Interesting concept and very engrossing as all of your stories are. Happily read your recent submission as number 200. Congrats.

I just LOVE this story.

We’ll done sir!

TK

Loving the story.

I'm glad I'm not inside your head. Your creativity boggles my mind. Thank you, and I'll look forward to the next installment.

Can't wait till the next update really enjoy this story

Great continuation. Thanks for writing.

yes keep them coming 5 stars

Oh my GOD. You know I am a big fan and have read most if not all of your stories. I know it is a long shot but I believe you could pitch this to someone as a TV show or even a movie. Remember J K Rawlings got rejected by the entire publishing industry before Harry Potter took off and became the phenomenon it was, thanks for a great ongoing story.

Classic ST saga continues - 5*

Darn, shucks and yuck! Quickly, write faster. Action is coming and I am anxious. Five!

more please. Just what I needed yo help pass covid home isolation. An excellent blend of mythology, reality?, romance and mystery

thx

and not a very engaging or compelling story, for any category. The writing is about 40% excess fat. Glad so many others are enjoying it. Thanks for the effort.

great story so far, keep it coming

Once again another great chapter of an epic tale. Just awesome.

Loving the tale!

can't wait for more

I for one am hooked

This chapter was like an old Air Force radar site that sat between two other sites and acted as a gap-filler. When the two sites picked up activity at their outer edge the gap-filler filled in needed data to track the unknow activity. We are getting more intel on the enemy so Arte and Noei can respond as necessary.

Good instalment

Well, I honestly don't think that you can simply finish this in one more installment. I certainly hope that I haven’t become invested in a story that will never get a proper ending. I'm still giving you a 5/5 so far.

By the last comment shows the reader doesn't know the Saddle Tramp like the rest of us! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Thanks again ST.