All Comments on '"Santa's Elves Will Do WHAT?"'

It does not meet the criterion of "self contained" because it appears to call for additional chapters. Mistake. But I did write it and figured I'd post, and it IS about Christmas. And so rationalizations carry us along...

It sounds like the start to a great story, but on its own it was pretty boring.

As I said in my other comment. Does not stand alone very well. I tend to be a writing machine, and have completed the next two chapters, but I can't really post them. I mean, a rule for posting in a Holiday story is that it be stand alone, right? Can't make myself a liar. Oh, what a tangled web we we've... Thanks for commenting.

I agree with the last bloke