by HeyAll
dam I was lost reading it. Wished I were there enjoying. Watching or.........
But all that preparation isn't critical to an enjoyable first encounter... And you didn't mention anything about the logistics of cleanliness and hygiene... An absolute must if I'm going to be licked there. I love getting and giving anal mouth sex...
A wonderful way to explain how to do anal for the first time. The one person who commented that all the prep wasn't necessary is one who should only stick to people that are experienced. I have converted several people to the enjoyment of anal sex and even had some that were experienced to comment that it was the first time they truly enjoyed the act. A very nice job of story telling and trying to educate the unknowing.
The story was well written. To say the least, a quick and enjoyable read.
Thanks
Well written (I only noticed a few very minor tweaks in tense and I'm plagued with an internal grammar nazi who notices them all LOL) and fun to read. At no point did I find myself yanked from the experience by trying to picture myself in an impossible position or because what you were describing wouldn't feel like that to me.
Thank you for treating the preparation (both Sally's mental prep work and the spa's discussion and physical prep work) as an essential part of the experience. Having received both well prepped and very poorly done experiences, I can say that well prepped has always been better by a long shot!
Keep up the good work!
I want a gift card from this place! I have done anal play, but it has been such a long time since then that I would need to be stretched in order to enjoy it. Thank you for a wonderful story!
It almost makes me want to experience the spa, Gianna, AND the masseur. Very hot story. Good job. Whew!
So hot.. I wish she and Gianna enjoyed more together... But that could be next year's trip.
You had Sally mention she had experienced girl/girl action so I expected her to kiss Gianna’s pussy. You positioned her in front of Sally and she was nude so her pussy was visible and within reach. That could have been page 4.
Excellent story. Slow build but it keeps giving the reader a little more and a little more. Fully believable with only a little suspension of disbelief. I could really feel what Sally was feeling.