by JimBob44
Another installment of the tales of ‘Demon Rum’. A sweet and sexy (and musky and sweaty) bit of lovemaking. Made me smile. Excuse me while I (ahem) step away to adjust my pants! Thank you for another new story.
Decent story. But you overwrite, which is distracting. Too many middle names, unnecessary adjectives, square footage details, etc. Sometimes, even with creative writing, less is more.