by HeyAll
This so good! A great story to read!
More of it too please;)
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Well done! Only negative, the ending seemed abrupt to me. Seemed doesn't necessarily mean it was.
Very well written story, you seem to have a good knowledge of the film world.
Great story and very sexy.
Thank you for sharing!
In keeping with your show biz theme: Bravo! Encore! A well written story with a great plot. Surely you can add to this, either with Sienna and/or Heather or perhaps new characters. You know, like in True Detective or American Horror Story. Please give us more.
So erotically descriptive, I have some extra lip gloss for both Sienna and Heather. Might just have to use it myself, mmmm...
Five stars, plus the one's I saw after finishing....
Just an observation - if a pool is going to be used then it is easier - and cheaper - to keep it heated than starting from room temperature everyday. Other than that, excellent.
"Will you be here?"
"Maybe, maybe not."
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The questioning look disappears. Feeling alive and vibrant, with new confidence and energy flooding her mind, spirit and body she decides it wasn't a question. A cloud darkens her eyes. With an emphatic downward tilt of her head, she tells Heather. "Be here!"
I like stories with hero endings, for me this beautiful story is missing the Oscar 😊 , but I loved it…great writing talent
Loved it, I think you made a mistake when you mentioned the internet btw