All Comments on 'Quiet Sunday Morning'

Get a better editor. I couldn't get halfway through page one.

I thought it was great. There are some spelling and grammatical errors sure but I know from personal experience when your writing you tend to miss those. It would help if you had some one proof for you. Good job!

Ignore the delightful trolls, a great story with some typo's etc. but this is a site for any writer and I for one appreciate your efforts - the story is so hot who cares about the odd glitch.

I loved it. You didn't push to fast and built it up a bit. Very good story. Kept me interested and excited all the way through. Keep writing and I will keep giving you 5 stars

Hey JB, just wanted to say Hey and let you know I like your writing.

Sincerely,

Santacruzman

Nice story with love thrown in for good measure. I edited my own stories for a while. It gets easier with time.

Enjoyed this story immensely. A gal like Tawnee is on my bucket list.

Thanks for the enjoyable, erotic read.

So hot who wouldnt want to meat a babe like tawnee so delicious i could play with her night and day just take breaks to eat and shower yeah

A great storyline, well told. Thanks for sharing with us.

What a positively beautiful love story. I felt the love between the two. Incredible writing and though it was fiction I could almost feel it was true. Great story.

Very interesting story. I love any kind of love story. Thanks for posting.

I thought it was awesome lotta little twists, I know you wrote this 4 years ago but if you haven’t I think you should follow a up little bit.

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A little too long in setting the stage for Tawnee and Duncan’s eventual coupling, but was overall a good story. Thank you for sharing. Would like to read more about the couple’s relationship.