All Comments on 'Quest for Normal Pt. 02'

I hope she can turn it around. She saved two lives by taking a worthless one.

Fantastic as always! Looking forward to your next submission. Thanks for sharing your stories with us.

Thanks for mentioning my favorite bassist. I still listen to "Mississippi Queen" all the time. His best work was in Cream with Carl Palmer and George Harrison, but I still love his solo stuff.

Looks like you left Darla's and Herbert's stories hanging. But then mayhap another story, another time for them.

Keep writing 'em, y'hear?

Another great finish, my only complaint is leaving Darla sad at the end hope something happens to cheer up the 0opr girl.

Hope Darla finds forgiveness, and happiness, Her daddy needed killing. Great story once again. Thank you for it!

How do you do this every damn time, JimBob? I start reading, next thing I know an hour or two has gone by and I’ve been completely engrossed. As always, well done. Hope we see more of Darla in future tales.

Women don’t say “ugh” when they orgasm. Ugh has a negative connotation as in “Ugh I just got in a car accident “.

See title!

Enjoyed the story overall, but the names?

Jenny, Jessica, Jerry… Jennica???

It would really help readers follow who's doing what to whom if the characters' names began with different letters!

That minor gripe aside, a really good story… keep it up!

Such a good story. Darla should have had a conclusion but otherwise it was perfect

You managed to end this "could be a novel" in this second part. But Darla needed to finish her story, too.

Maybe that is a way to tie another chapter on now?

Thanks for great story telling.

You can't leave poor Darla in limbo like that. You need to write a 5 word sequel to this story. "Darla lived happily ever after."