All Comments on 'Patricks Marriage Changes Ch. 05'

About bloody time they posted this episode.

Hopefully the others will come sooner than this one.

Good work.

Absolutely captivating... there's no wondering why those words come to mind. Excellent writing Curious

This has taken such a left turn from any logic or level of eroticism that the only reasonable conclusion is that you, on some level, were think, "You people don't like cliches, huh? Well I'll show you there are worse things than cliches." If so, boy did you succeed!

If this had been under the Sci-Fi & Fantasy category it might be slightly palatable, but here it's just stupid and an insult to the intelligence of anyone over the age of 12.

And ya waited two weeks to post this? Yikes!

Keep up the good work, c2c, your stories are fun (as I am sure they are meant to be) and you show more than tell which puts you heads above other Literotica authors.

This chapter is good and would make a very good adventure story. It's to bad that you started it out the way you did. It proves that you can write when you want to, or should I say come up with an original idea when you want to.

My guess is that when you saw the responce that you were getting with the rehashed story that it was turning out to be you decided to change the story line. You really don't believe that anyone thinks that your stories are finished before you start submitting them. You should have taken your lumps on the story and started anew.

the plot is weak and the writer is getting off on the others fucking his wife.if you fuck another man wife ,a man will get even.

I gave up after the first 2 or 3 paragraphs of this pile of science- fiction -horror crap. What happened to you? You used to be a fine writer, but this story gets worse as it goes on. I was afraid i would get nauseous if I read any more of this garbage. How sad. 60 year old George

Why do I even start reading this fucked in the head authors bullshit?

Starting understand who and what is going on great story.

WORST EVER FUCKING STORY ON THIS SITE

consequences, play with the devil, lose your soul. TK

I like the part about the oils and her losing control. Keeping writing. Ignore the cowards who only give hate and do so anonymously.

If he has such power, what do they think he will do once they release him?

Yer Whyfe she done gettin' horny cause we all fed 'er right up with some horny sauce. Now sir, you jes watch an see when Bubba gives her some a that gol' durn horse meat a his! Yeehaw, she gonna ride that som bitch like air's no tomorra! Yer daddy, that boy was somethen' special! So, we's gone fuck yer gal awhile so's you can see she likes a gooood fuck. And that'll get us your daddy's power, slicker than shit, huh!? Ya say ya'll'll hep us? Well durn, that's mighty nice of yuh, but we's still fucking yer wife, cause it helps the author beat off.

Well written as usual. However his captors must die a horrible painful death.