by curious2c
Your story "Partners In Crime", is good for a bisexual story. I was disappointed to read my first lesbian story here today and it turned out to be a bisexual story put in a lesbian sex category? I picked Lesbian Sex Stories to read women who love women stories! I'm surprise that this site doesn't have a category for "Bisexual Sex", which is what your story is! But I guess that is what they call the "Group Sex" category?? But anyway, I do want to say, "Thanks for Sharing your story". Debmas1
that is da best bi story yet brilliant twist in de end but a little bit dissappionted but who gives a shit dat was brill
Your exclamation marks are EVERYWHERE, they are good at points, but not every sentence. This might have been a good story with the proper editor, but sadly, it was not.
Has your keyboard lost the full stop and been replaced by an exclamation mark?! Makes an otherwise good story really hard to read.