All Comments on 'Ocean's Secrets'

by Pelaam

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love It!

Yet another wonderful, beautiful love story. I never tire reading your stories Pelaam. Can't wait to keep seeing what you come up with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wonderful

I love this story its one of your best so far. We'll like to know if there will be a sequel

woman3450woman3450over 14 years ago
A beautiful love story

I was enthralled with their relationship, so loving and sensual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Brilliant!

Lovely story! Love your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
aaaaawwwwww

this story is so sweet i love your writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Pure class!

Your stories are a delight to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
EXCELLENT!

I finished it with a smile on my face. It was truly a joy to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
amazing

you are such a good writer and i've read all ur stories n luvd each one.....this story was absolutely amazing.....im waiting to read more....plz write a new story soon.

willieonewillieoneover 12 years ago
Ooops!

I thought I had left a comment the first time I read this wonderful story last year but seems I didn't.

So will tell you now this is my all time favourite of all your stories even though I thought Silver and Vampire Lovers were awesome and want more of them.

But THIS is my favourite. It is brilliant,beautiful and warms the heart reading it. Thank you for sharing your fantastic gift with us mere mortals.

4catsrmine4catsrmineover 12 years ago
OHHHH!

I was so drawn into this story...I can't say I've read anything else that is as beautiful as this. I hope you will write more stories like this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

LOVE THIS, i have literally read every single story you have ever posted more than 3 times , please come back and bless us with more of your amazing work .

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

this gave me a headache sorry.?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
loved this

loved it so so far favorite in merman tales keep writing it was great loved the happy ending

Jimmy410Jimmy410over 10 years ago
Amazing

The story was quite amazing. Although it went a littlemfast it was really good. It had me anxious to keep reading. Keep up te good work.

tac_naynwafflestac_naynwafflesalmost 10 years ago

Your works never get boring no matter how many times I read them... :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I can't tell you how much I love this story!

I just can't help coming back to read it and fall in love all over again.

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