by Evil Alpaca
I was hoping to come across something new from you sooner rather than later. I wish I could think of something more substantial or constructive to say here, but my brain no worky so good right now. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
It was a welcome suprise to see your name pop up again on the stories list. Like your stories before this, my sense of wonder and curiosity has been piqued (what shall become of her, how shall she react, etc ...), and left me waiting for more chapters. Again well written, and enjoyable. On a personal note I am glad to see more work from you again, can't help it I love your stories.
Great to see another story from you. Can't wait for the next installment!
I thought that I was going to have to wait until summer for a new story. Great start, looking forward to see where this is going.
and i am sure its only going to get wilder ( no to mention a lot hairriier)
Your stories always have me hooked and craving another word, sentence, chapter. So this find just bowled over my other evening plans and brightened my day. I'll start reading now, the anticipation is killing me already. Just had to forego the comment and rating your comeback. I know this'll be awesome.
Great to see you back...I've always liked your stories and I consider you to be one of the best authors on Literotica. Having set my expectations so high, I'm glad to see that you haven't disappointed. This is a great start and I'm fascinated to see how the story develops - I can't wait for the next chapter.
Oh...I love the titular homage to one of the most famous vampires of all. Very clever.
A new story, in a new setting! Looking forward to seeing the rest of the installments.
-Zengar
I have been reading your stories for the past few years - always time well spent. One thing I have always noticed is that in each of your previous stories (at least Part I of a series) the reader is introduced to the protagonist or more often her thoughts. In this story you've started with a character who doesn't appear to be an important one (just finished reading Part II). Am I imagining this change or was it planned?
Regardless, great story so far and waiting avidly for the remaining parts (I wager at least 8 parts to this story).
All of the other comments seem to be from longtime fans who are familiar with other stories of yours... but not me. This was the very first chapter of the very first story of yours I have ever read. What a wonderful surprise, and it isn't even Christmas yet but it sure feels like it! I just love finding a new author with such exceptional talent. I guess I had better clear my schedule as I have a LOT of reading ahead of me.... thank you so very much for sharing your gifts!
Little bit of a rough start but even in just this first chapter, its sooo good.
I really like this story so far. Further because I live in Atlanta, it's extra special ;-)
Thats a start from a rocket base center ...... This story becomes an intense one or?
Excellent start, original idea, wonderful characters and there’s more chapters! 5⭐️