by Pelaam
The last comment shows at least they read it, I thought it was a good read
I can not see how anyone would say that this story was sick. I love this story and all of them that you write. You should keep writting and ignore all who say other wise. I love how all of your charaters love each other so much. Can't wait to read about when they get married.
I can not see how anyone would say that this story was sick. I love this story and all of them that you write. You should keep writting and ignore all who say other wise. I love how all of your charaters love each other so much. Can't wait to read about when they get married.
I am glad you carried on with this. I very much enjoyed the first chapter and this was an excellent continuation. Hope there will be a chapter 3.
Millie
I enjoyed the story it is great, but the Spanish spelling and grammar has some issues. Other than that I love it!!!!
Ok, hot passionate endearing real guttural perfection. What a great story line. We find ourselves cheering for nando and will the whole way through. I am totally spent having been caught up in the passion. Can't wait to read the rest of the tale. Thank you!