by Jimbo545
Long time reader, very rarely post….this needs a second chapter. In my humble opinion at least two or three chapters.
Well written, fun premise. Hopefully you will continue to explore the storyline in future updates.
There will be a few more chapters. I've already written half of the next one
So ,much coincidence for one so . . . Uninitiated?
Proof Reading required.
Would have liked if it was a longer story hope there will be more to come.