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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Definitely a good start. Must have a follow up chapter.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 2 months ago
Nature takes it's course

Such beautiful temptations happen when good looking people live together. The unfettered and confident act upon them. Very well written in a unique style

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Ruth is not too old for just one baby bump!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I did ask Robyn, "why she kept pulling my condoms off?"

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You had him talk to her in the 3rd person. This has nothing to do with being or not being an English major. Anyone past the age of 10 should know the difference.

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As for the request for another chapter: why? The story's done.

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I did ask Robyn, "Why do you keep pulling my condoms off?"

muskyboymuskyboyabout 2 months ago

An editor would have gotten you the fifth star. 4/5

IEnjoyEroticaIEnjoyEroticaabout 2 months ago

Low rating due to poor grammar and punction.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

What's punction? AG

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