by JimBob44
Another great tale from the Universe of JimBob44! You are such a fantastic writer, with a gifted touch in how you create your characters and relate them to your readers...I am so thankful that you are back and submitting more stories! 5 big stars!
That four way dialogue in the Benito’s Italian scene was just superb, as was the scene with granny Miller and baby Clarissa Faye. A great story to read with Saturday morning coffee. Thank you very much.
Outstanding!! But then again….that’s what I expect from the way you weave your tales!
That was simply fantastic. What a great, sweet little romance. Thank you JB!
I like that your stories always include trash like Latisha and Manny. They’re funny characters.
I don't comment on stories to much the last few years... I'm getting old and find it hard to type well enough to make sense, somedays. However, I had to write and tell you how much I enjoyed this story and your handling of circumstances that most folks screw up one way or another. Nice Job, I like your style! I am having to post this anonymously, because I finally forgot my password and the associated email account died nearly 20 years ago. Thank you!
Nice, warm story. No drama or tension, just an all-around feel-good tale.
Thanks for sharing.
While many people around the world will read this story and wonder; WTF this writer has gone bonkers. As I read this one I could hear them speaking with that LA Cajun drawl. I just smiled inside.
It is funny when you have traveled the world you can picture and hear the different dialects for what ever regions you have been. When you grow up in the US and travel, it is the same. Doesn't matter if it's from New York, Boston or New England. It could be the southern charming voices from Georgia, Alabama, North/South Carolina. It could be the Los Angeles, California laid back slang, "Dude." But we all hear it as we read. (LOL)
Being able to write in the Cajun drawl and make the story blend as well as this one to me is worth ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ in it's self. However, this story tells the story every bit as intriguing as anything I have read across all of the genres recently.
Keep Writing
JH4Fun
I was entertained and enjoyed your writing! Achieved marks - good storyline, characters and dialogue. So 5 stars happy to give!
So please keep writing for your pleasure and I will keep reading for my enjoyment!
Thank you for sharing and especially your afterward where you breakout where characters have been seen before - fantastic.
A good woman makes you want to be a better man. Not because she ever asked you to be any more then you are.
The rest either nag you to death or moan about everything. I got luck, I married a good woman.
AC in SC
There is nothing like the love of a good woman that just makes you want to be a better man.
Not because she has asked or prodded you, only because you want to live up to how she sees you. I am luckily enough to have just that kind of woman . Great story! ACin SC
Just saw this one, great story and characters including the recurring ones. Thanks for writing such entertaining stories.