All Comments on 'Mother's Helping Hand Ch. 25'

While you can write many different independent stories...

Great storyline mate, and hoping that you return to start something anew, you have a gift! So many memories with this one :)

The first 15 or so chapters of this series was some of the best content ive ever read.

The believableness, slow pace and reluctance on the mothers part made this story.

Hope you write another story, this time for mom ass lovers :p

....but honestly NOT the kind of ending I always had in mind for a long time.

Sorry, but F**** you.

So much promise & potential. So much time wasted.

F**** you truly.

I was kinda hoping for Allison to finally let bobby cum inside her without complaining in the last chapter but this works as well. I’m really looking forward to your other story and seeing mom son action eventually. Great work, keep it up!

Awesome story, you are a pro.

Hope you keep writing

Again, thanks for the 25 chapters

For the update and an ending I get the sense your done with writing and honestly I don’t blame you. I hope your other story gets an update someday

Thank you for finishing this story.. It was great spending a few years in your head as Bobby and Alison's lives progressed.... Again Thank You ...

Could you finish the Vacation series as well...

I myself was hoping to at least see Alison very willingly spread her legs for Bobby and have a very loving Mother and Son intercourse.

Would love to see another loving Mother and Son story.

As glad as I am that DS finally finished this story and that Erica didn't turn out to be a villain, this ending felt pretty rushed. After so many chapters of Alison's reluctance to engage in sexual activity with her son, especially as it took on an increasingly romantic feel, I was disappointed she and Bobby never had a chance to share their feelings about the nature of their relationship. Keep in mind, the last contact these two characters had was Alison leaving Bobby, ending their physical relationship so he could be with someone his own age. You can't reconcile that with a flash forward to them living together without at least a short heart-to-heart between the mother and son.

There were also some unresolved questions regarding Alison's pregnancy and Erica's relationship with Bobby. DS, were you trying to imply Trinity is their daughter? If so, how is it she has blonde hair? That made me think she was perhaps Bobby and Erica's daughter, but then she refers to Alison as her mom, and Erica isn't even mentioned in the Epilogue.

Now that we know her tormenting Bobby really was performed under duress, I would think they'd actually be a decent couple. Both know what it's like to have strong feelings for their parents, so Erica might be one of the few people that Bobby could be with who could accept his relationship with his mom, and vice versa. Speaking of Erica, it was pretty confusing that Petty would have her father fired when she had been obeying his instructions to tease Bobby. Perhaps if there'd been a scene in the beginning of the chapter where Erica accidentally let Bobby cum, Petty would've had a reason to punish her.

It's ironic just how thrown together this conclusion feels when it's been about ten months since the last chapter. I can understand if DS was under a ton of pressure to finish the story even if he wasn't entirely happy with what he had written so far, but I do wish he'd fleshed out a few more elements before concluding.

With that said, I still really appreciate this overall story and DS for sharing it. Though the ending we got may have been short, it's better than leaving us hanging, and I'm glad it was a happy one.

Great to see you active on here again.

This has been one of my all time favorite story series ever to grace these pages. Kind of sad to see it end but all good things must end eventually i suppose!

Would love to see you continue with your 'Nudist Family Holiday' series in the future.

Looks like the fans need to see the gap filled up Dick_Spanker. So please...write a side story to be inserted before the epilogue.

Appreciate the ending, but very rushed. I would have very much enjoyed seeing how the story ended without the blackmail portion, seemed wholly unnecessary given the previous 20 chapters.

That said, one of my favorite reads on this site.

To be fair, I've been waiting a long time for this ending and I was never happy with the blackmail arc. Still, I'm happy to finally see the end of this story, even if this last chapter was rushed and didn't have the same quality that some of the middle chapters did.

I agree with 95% of these comments. I would had liked to have seen more after the limo scene. Having a 3some at home w/girl on girl too. Then involve daddy with a foursome living close by. And explain how their daughter got involved.

average story and he sure says "I'm sorry" a lot.

This story really turned into a shit-fest when you brought in the stupid blackmail bullshit. And the funny thing is, I think you realised that a long time ago. Good job "dick".

Like a ripe apple on a tree.

But then it fell.

And then it got rotten.

And then it started rolling downhill, picking up all sorts of loose shit.

And finally it splattered against a wall, throwing shit everywhere and making you want to never eat apples again.

Too bad, it had a lot of promise.

Rushed ending but good overall. Definitely coming back to it every so often. Hope you can write something you enjoy more!

A great series. Thanks for your time and imagination.

The entire series was just awesome. I would love to see it continue. the entire session with Allison being pregnant thru Trinity's growing up...

Much thanks for a very entertaining series

Imaginative. Great female characters. And a good job with Nathan, not a stereotype.

I think the last chapter was too brief. I would like it if you could revisit this series one day. Show what happened to Alison and Bobby during that 18 year period. Lots of more ground to cover.

Each and every person has different taste so when you change the ambiance of a story, you lose most of your readers.

The chapters before the NY trip were absolutely amazing, then there was club Bacchus and it was ok for most of it and when they went home the story and everything changed with backmails and such.

You should have stuck with the same theme for the duration of the story and write other stories if you had other ideas. I didn't read the last 3 chapters and just glanced at them to see if things got better. They did not.

Honestly the blackmail stuff just reminded everything about reading about Epstein. This is good first and then it just went a really nasty route. The ending could have been a lot better and explained better. I guess I can't get too mad because it's free and if I want to better when I guess like I pay for it

no Erica happily ever after?

Loved it one of my favorites

Blackmail chapter is a chicken shit!!

The build-up in the beginning was one of the best I've seen on a free porn story. It had a lot of potential. I loved everything until the blackmail part. The the remainder seemed too slow and boring in the beginning and rushed and brief at the end. But can't really complain! This is free after all. I still wish you had stuck to the original theme and skipped to the epilogue.

Honestly I would have liked a few things done differently. Bobby could have a bit more personality than just someone obsessed with boobs. Also the story seemed razor focused on Bobby's dick getting milked. I would have enjoyed a bit more romance between Alison & Bob. But overall it was a great read (except of course the last part).

This would've been even better if it had some nuclear revenge involved. I rate it 49/50 for lacking that.

I loved the story. I didn’t care for the loooooonnnnng drawn out time while she decided on whether to have sex or now. What she did to her son for weeks was awful and mean. She wasn’t adult enough to know what she was doing to her son? Anyway, that is my only complaint about the story except for the British influence in your choice of words. They were supposedly Americans but the British slang kept slipping in and taking me from reading the story to trying to understand what the British translated into in American. It’s not as hard as translating Oz into English but it’s close. Also several grammatical and spelling problems that could be cleared up with a better editor. There are a list of volunteer editors you can get to through the 1st page of Literotica. I enjoyed your store and as a whole, it was well written and flowed well. Keep up the good work. MtM

Great series

I lived the story. The suspense and wandering what will happen. Pleasure to read