All Comments on 'Monsters in My Bed'

More please!

Great story. I hope you continue this story.

Der Titel erinnert mich an eine Beziehung in meiner Jugend aber das ist eine andere Geschichte...

Wie immer wird ein sehr schönes Bühnenbild erschaffen auf der die Protagonisten dann agieren.

Es macht Spaß die Geschichte zu lesen. Sie erinnert mich an ähnliche Geschichten, die in den letzten 10 Monaten von Dir veröffentlicht wurden. Vielleicht solltest Du die Geschichten im Rahmen einer Fortsetzung zusammenführen.

Loved it! Please continue the story.

Please, more. This is great!!

Would love to see a part 2 of this story.

Not bad at all. Gave you 5 for this one but it definitely felt like it lacked…something. I’m honestly hard pressed to say what it is but it was hard for me to connect to any of the characters.

The polyamory and mates being temporary thing is a very nice change from the usual wolf stories on here though. I’ll keep any eye for more from you

To BriteStudioMKM from Ada Stuart:

Gosh, that is so true (OMG, I feel like I've been totally blind when I tried to fix all the plotholes). Thanks for pointing it out. I will add some more details on the characters so that they will appear less one-dimensional. Thank you so much for the help :-)

And yes, I'm currently working on a longer version of this. I just couldn't leave the 'Monsters' alone, so thank you so much to everybody that can give me ideas on where to take this :-)

Great start

Good idea and as has been said original, in as much as I don’t recall seeing a wolf threesome on Lit before. However, the transition between her holding him at gunpoint and then them having sex was clunky and seemed rushed, I’d have liked a lot more scene setting, explanation and justification of what and why events went the way they did, as it stands it’s a three scene act with the rest of the play missing imho.

Please continue this story

i would love to read more of this <3

The pace might be a bit fast but otherwise it's nice!

To Purplefizz from Ada Stuart

Great advice! I'll expand some more before they head for the sex scene. Thank you so much for the comment :-)

And scene-setting, I'll probably have to address that throughout the story, to be honest. I just realised I forgot to give them much of a background (well, I tend to forget those details)

And thank you Anonymous :-) I'll fix the pace also :-) I really appreciate all your help with this one :-)

I’d love to read more of this, I agree with Purplefizz that it seemed a bit rushed from gun point to sex. You’re a great writer and I’m definitely a fan. (5 ⭐️)

Thanks for sharing. Tess (uk)

As others have said, it was a bit rushed, which isn't uncommon in one-off stories, but I'd love to read more of this story. Perhaps her brother is reluctant to stay as a shifter's mate, she probably will be, especially if it's not as temporary as they implied. Either way, good work.

Good for a contest entry. Enough detail to wet the appetite and keep the interest going though it seems to have stopped in mid stream. The emphasis is on Ivy recovering her brother and we know he's alive but she's not met him yet although this is planned. There's plenty of scope to enhance the characters, flesh them out and then take it forward later and you've indicated that is your intention. I look forward to a revised and longer version.

5⛤

It was good but it should have more build to the body of it for it just started in the middle and went left field all of a sudden and then went to the climax and then fizzled out

To LiterKnight from Ada Stuart

Cool! I like your idea about the brother. Thanks for helping me with this one :-)

To Ravey19 from Ada Stuart

Excellent idea! I will definitely try to give them a bit more substance :-) I've already added 12k to it based on the wonderful advice I've got here on Literotica :-)

A solid contest entry! Enjoyed the twist on the werewolves, and I wonder if Alicia and Marcus might have a similar tryst? A good read! Thanks!

Really enjoyed reading! Would love for you to continue this!

Is there a sequel?

To Anonymous from Ada Stuart

Yes, there will be a sequel. It's currently on my laptop and awaiting some more editing before I can publish it. But I need to finish a Winter Contest story before returning to it.

Loved it! More please

To Anonymous and PMDlite from Ada Stuart:

1. Anonymous: "Is there a sequel?"

Yes, there is one now, I finally managed to finish the story and it turned out to be a lot longer than I thought it would be. I've just published it to all the retailers I'm working with, so if you're interested, please check my author bio page for more information

2. PMDlite: "A solid contest entry! Enjoyed the twist on the werewolves, and I wonder if Alicia and Marcus might have a similar tryst? A good read! Thanks!"

You're not the only one who's asked that question, and in fact I already had plenty of ideas that I would like to add to their story. So, yes, there will be one, but first I have a Valentine contest story to write :-)

Loved it ... hoping there is more to come

Loved the story. Can't find the sequel though - I noticed you mentioned it in another comment.

To Anonymous from Ada Stuart:

The sequel is titled "Mating the Monsters". I haven't published it here on Lit, but you can find it on all the other sites where my ebooks are available :-)

Hi author,

Is there any plans of publishing the sequel “Mating with monsters” on this site any time soon?

To Foxycatlady from Ada Stuart:

Thanks for asking, but unfortunately I don't have any plans of publishing it here. Surprisingly enough, "Mating the Monsters" has actually become my fourth bestselling ebook despite only being available since January this year. So, my current plan is to write another book in the series and tell Marcus's story too.

That said, I will be publishing other stories here. F ex I will soon post a story for the Nude day contest so I hope you will give it a try :-)

it was good but needs more